you fucking bitch.

you had the perfect opportunity for fluff, ONCE AGAIN, but then you go and stuff it all up.

buuuut, I can tell you read the PJO books. Annabelle Chase? I grinned reading that name until i found out she was Ryans girlfriend. then she could go die alone in a hole in Siberia miserably and lonely. and Ryans parents could join her in her fate, but they would all have to be lonely.

i get weird late at night... sorry about that.

that moment between Ellie and Adelaide was epic. seriously. but I was sooo dissapointed when Ryan didnt make it to her flight, i seriously needed some fluff after the last thing you pulled on us... anyway, what about the arranged marriage between Caleb and Tiff? are you gonna make a sequel or a quick solution or is this story even complete idk but for that i need to read on and for that i need to shut up and end this review.

so i will

in the middle, when they kissed, I was like HALLELUYAH!

but then. i swear to God, my smile just fell off my face. like you see in the movies and everything. I guess its to add more to the story, but stil im like asdfghjkl...

*sigh* anyway, at least ehyre safe. I could almost hear Tiff saying 'Burn, motherfuckers!' in my head.

im kinda weird.

anyway, you made me wanna do a happy dance one minute and scream at fictional characters the next to just get their shit sorted... it takes a special talent. believe me, no one could turn my emotions around that quickly, except for offering me chcolate. then I get happy instantly :)

what the hell is Tiff doing? seriously, you become a hostage, you escape, you LEAVE. WHY ISNT SHE LEAVING?

maybe its a revenge thing, where she like 'Im gonna burn this thing to the ground!' or something like that, but that would be slightly illogical...

anyway, love the writing and the suspense. its really, really good :)

i cannot believe you just did that. YOU BLOODY MADE SOMEONE INTERUPT THEM RIGHT WHEN THEY WERE GOING TO KISS? AAARGGHH! alright, I get that Ellie needs to get emotionally attached and everything, but STILL. ARGH, god.

holy shit. i was soo not expecting that. like seriously, when Ellie woke up i was like oh, this is just another prank war, but then nooo, Blakes tarted talking to Aaron and then he got shot and i was like fuck this is some real business.

what a douche is Blake, seriously. he is a creeper... when i thik about it, there was that kiss that shouldve given me a sign, but didnt.

shit gurl, you changed it all up. i do like some adventure, just not the people-getting-hurt-and-dying-part

you so stole that from AAoOD. its on like Donkey Kong? or maybe its just my under-culturated (yes, i am aware that that is nor a legit word) self not knowing where it really came from...

ooooooh, youre an Aussie? awesome! I just love your accents, theyre to die for. but to be honest, id rather live though :)

lame attempt at a joke.

anyway, youre still awesome.

i totally overuse that word. i really should stop.

for the Dutchies, you can buy alcohol when youre 16, and heavy liquors when youre 18. driving is also 18. my aunt who lived in Mexico told me you could drive at 14 there, which is really messed up. my cousin said lots of accidents happen there...

anyway, Ryan is acting EXTREMELY cocky, considering he was comparing her to Venus... seriously, he needs some humiliation.

but then again, where would the fun be in that?

still loving the writing!

ryan is seriously sappy. like seriously, hes one step away of writing poetry.

but hes really sweet.

loved this chapter and the past few where i havent reviewed. i really like your writing style, even though you made Ryan very, very sentimental. I didnt really expect that from what we've seen from him in this story, but its funny to see how characters can surprise you.

alright, signing off.

i always wanted agay best friend. somehow almost all of those guys are programmed to be awesome.

i might be overusing the word awesome.

anyway, the prank war was hilarious, i really liked it.

And Kelvin and Connor are the definition of awesome.

see? i do overuse it.

anyway, loved the chapter!

wait a sec, are they American or British?

loved the chapter, even more problems between the four rivals. well, two gorups of two rivals, but you get what i mean.

im gonna shut up now.

oooooooh I sense some sexual tension. always a good recipe for a story. sexual tension, stubborn (but hot) people, and maybe a trouble-making hilarious duo of brothers/twins.

foes become kissing buddies, after all.

i swear that is how it works out in every good story.

anyway, i loved it. Caleb and Tiffany sound... pleasant. and dayum, number 18? Ellie got herself a good catch ;)

BUT SHE 5'3"? goddammit, now i feel even more like a giant. try being 5'11"... genes of the Dutchies. yay.

somehow I like Tiffany. she sounds awesome, even though she is kinda slutty.

anyway, good writing, i really liked it :)

Woo! It's almost midnight where I am and I have finally finished this story! I like the real ending much better than heart attack chapter. Much more "oooh aaah awww haha" worthy.
I really enjoyed the entire story. It was awesome seeing such an international scale and stuff. Thanks to you I have also finally found out what mace is! Well, other than the flail/spikey metal ball on a chain on a stick (as I like to think of it). It makes so much more sense for someone to carry pepper spray in their puse than a flail.
It's hard to think of anything I didn't like about this story plot-wise and character-wise. I was sucked in to this story so easily. Bravo!
The only thing I'm going to complain about it that you often mixed up you're and your (and I saw a their/they're mistake a few times). I noticed that you'd use you're as a possessive one sentence and just a little bit later you'd correctly use your as the possessive so I'm thinking it was just a mistake you often repeated.
While the tiny mistakes were a tiny but distracting for me, they definitely did not stop me from just falling in live with TDoHW. Thank you so much for sharing this wonderful story of yours. You are awesome.
(Oh look at the time. After midnight. Oops.)

I got addicted to this story almost the second I began reading it. Since I've had a busy day and I didn't want to stop to leave reviews when I could be otherwise spendin my time reading this amazing story, I just kinda thought that I'd review once I finished. Well, that plan has gone kaput thanks to this horrible chapter. I feel like I nearly had a heart attack thanks to this chapter! As I was reading, at first I was worried about Ryan, and then I was rolling my eyes (affectionately, kinda) at how cheesy (for lack of a better word thanks to my muddled mind) and strange the situation was, and then BAM! Queue heart attack (I've read a few stories that I've adored as I was reading them just to have them end with a tragedy and rip my heart to shreds). This chapter was just flat out cruel and unusual torture. You suck! (And by that I mean I seriously love you and this story.)
Okay. Time for me to finish reading.