I just came on here and found this story finished! Oh my! How awesome! Well, I can say that I absolutely love the ending. Ryan and Ellie deserve to FINALLY (!) be together, or else Ryan probably would have descended into a pathetic wallowing state of nothingness, ha. My favorite part of this story has always been Tiffany and Caleb and I'm so glad that there will be a sequel. I know you said you're going to work on I Spy but please start the sequel to this soon - I simply have to know what happens with Tiff and Caleb's arranged marriage! It's going to be awesome.

Excellent job!

- soph

So, the sequel will be about Tiffany and Caleb, right? If it is, it will definitely be hilarious! Thank you for this story! I followed it for the longest time, even though I wasn't registered yet (yep, I kept it on my favorites tab ahah) in fiction press. You're one of the best writers here, please continue writing!

Awesome ending! Although I agree, it needs a sequel. lol. Also, I wouldn't bother going back to edit it again. It was AWESOME this round. I hope you continue, and if you do, then I can't wait to see what hapens next!

aww finished

thanks for the final chapter :) i love the ending, it was very satisfactory. wonderful story

-cries- I can't believe it's over! I loved the ending but still curious about whats going on with Caleb and Tiff later on!

I look forward to the possible sequel if you do one! Cheers!

Sorry, I had to leave another review because I have stuff to add!

Ryan Andrews is my hero. I love every word that comes out of that boy's mouth. My favorite chapters are the ones from his point of view. Could you write the final chapter in his POV? I love getting that inside perspective.

Also, would you hate me if I requested pictures for your characters. I would love you forever if you could!

That was perfection. Seriously. I was expecting a lot out of this chapter after you posted the romeo and juliet scene. You blew those expectations off the roof. I applaud you!

And I love the way you write! Especially the long winded omega-3 metaphor. It made me think wtf and smile at the same time. You have a way with words. I wish I could be just as eloquent in my writing. You made me laugh, cry, smile, and get that pit feeling in my stomach.

I do hope Caleb and Tiffany can quit bickering and just get together already. Too much sexual tension! Lmfao. Please post some sort of an epilogue/sequal to finish their story. I can't wait to see how their arranged marriage plays out.

Yay omg finally! Anyway I don't quite know why but the line "..my lunch threatened to reintroduce itself." seriously cracked the hell outta me.

And Ellie's such a dork sometimes and I can totally imagine her just yelling at someone out of a cab and throwing her drink out. Lolx.

I'll miss this story. Epilogue?

AWESOME!

Such a good story. I'm sad to see it end (for now at least). I hope you do write something about Caleb and Tiff or even a snippet of an epilogue to see how it does work out.

that wasn't very nice of you haha, i had a feeling you were just messing with us but a part of me was still a little nervous haha

thanks for that. i really thought it was serious until i read the an. all i kept thinking was 'she cannot end it like this! no way!' can't wait for the real ending!

you are very cool.

enough said :)

Just discovered this story and absolutely love it

The love may be due to my current intoxicated state but hey, writers can't be choosers :)

I love it so much that it's 4 in the morning here and I've stayed awake to read this story after getting back from my friend's 18th birthday.

I played the fun game of 'metaphor, simile, simile, simile, metaphor' throughout a few of your chapters. You really do use an unholy amount of similes, I'm very impressed.

Ah well, guess I'd better get some sleep tonight, hopefully might sober me up a bit.

Update soon :D,

Lauren