|Reviews for Breaking The Barrier|
| thewhimsicalbard chapter 1 . 1/1/2010
There's so much Medieval imagery in this poem, but that's all I see. I see no enemy, he's faceless. I don't feel anything towards this enemy. I might as well be in history class. I don't know what you tried to accomplish, but I'm not sure you got it done with this poem.
Sorry if I was a little blunt, I'm just trying to help you improve!