do they eventually get a baby then?

I miss this story - but it was very good

aaw...see!

this is still a really good story! :P

Love,

Tee

Oh my...I didn't realize how terribly I've been missing this story! I suppose I blocked it out or something so I wouldn't think about it. lol

Thank you for the fix my dear. Big hugs! Oh..can we assume that Nate and Cal get their baby eventually?

So far, Nate's annoying (though I love the name Nathaniel), I think Josh is an ass, and Cal needs to grow up. Overall...Good story.

OMG I LUBB UR STORY! ITS THE BEST ONE I'VE EVER READ! 5 stars if i could rank it : )

aw i wish this story would never end... ive spend all my free time reading this and I FUCKING LOVED IT D

your a great writer and you inspired me for my next story, thank you so much :)

pf That girl is so effin bitchy to EVERYONE without reasons most of the times... stubborn, bitchy and jealous... I like it... wouldnt be my type to date tho lol.

Good story so far! I love it, i keep reading and reading... (even at school, naughty me O )

So this sees interesting. I like their first conversation. And 35 Rockets(as a name) amuses me. :)

I actually rolled on the floor laughing at this chapter... because of the reactions of maddox and josh while they have foreplay lol... "8.5 outta 10" xD!

This story was great! I really enjoyed reading it, although it was at the expense of studying for finals... so worth it though :)

Keep up the good work!

Awesome story i enjoyed reading it

Hey! I really enjoyed your story, I hope you're up for a little CC? Maybe? alright. I think you are a really really good writer, and you have an awesome tone. But, you could use some work on your characterization and plot. The story was a fantastic idea, and I write too so I know what it's like to get carried away with things, and I started the story thinking it was about Josh and Cal, and then it kind of not-so-gracefully drifted away from that. The way I usually work though that is writing out a plot line so I don't get carried away and let the story drift. The characterization was good, the characters had depth which is hard to find on a website like this, but I kind of didn't understand the relationships between the characters. I read that comment how you have a friend just like maddox, but in the story you never really showed how cal and maddox originally became so close, so it was hard to understand why she felt so possessive of him. The whole Josh thing was a little more confusing, they were really close? and then he didn't talk to her? did you explain that and I just didn't read carefully enough? I don't understand why Cal was so jealous of Nora, she had no hold on Josh. Maybe that was characterization? trying to make us hate the main character (and to be honest I totally did, which is good, because if I have any type of emotion towards a character it means it's well written). I think I'm rambling now.

Please don't hate me for this CC, I still really did enjoy the story, and I plan to reading the rest of your stories soon!

Diana

This is an amazing story. When I found it I couldn't stop reading it. There were so many twist and turns, I never got bored reading it. I was always excited to see what was going to happen next. Your an amazing writer, and I just loved this story. I loved how and started and how it ended, and the characters are all so different and work so well with each other. I have no complaints about this story I enjoyed very, very much.

I loved your story it was awesome. Of course I hate Nora. Josh was a dumbass towards the end. I loved Maddie he was awesome. I'm glad that her and Nate made everything work out so well together.

I really loved this story, normally I don't read long stories because I get side tracked and loose interest but this story kept me going through the whole thing. I would love to hear more about what happens with Josh and if Nate and Callen have kids and what happens with Maddie.