Amazing story!

I always read and never review but I have to this time. You've written the kind of story that brings the readers in and makes them feel like they are living it, but it drives me insane at the same time. Every time Nate and Callen are happy I almost want to stop reading so I can be naive and pretend that they'll stay that way forever. I've got about 20 more chapters to read which drives me even crazier because I know that's a lot of time for you to cause more problems for them. I hate it but then I love it when they still go back to each other every time. Thanks for doing a great job.

YAY!

Your more than a decent writer, I assure you. Also, I CAN'T BELIEVE THIS STORY GOT PLAGIARIZED! That totally sucks! If I find something I'll tell you. I sounded cheessy didn't I? Anyway, bye.

HA! Thats funny at the end. I'm happy she wants a baby but I wish you made a chapter that had the baby.

YAY! BRAVO! I LOVED READING THIS AND I HOPE YOU DIDN'T DISLIKE MY REVIEWS! I TALK TOO MUCH! BRAVO AND BYE!

Loved it! Big shocker but I instantly guessed right when Nate came in and started yelling. AWESOME!

AWESOME! I'M EATING LUNCH WHILE READING! BIT HARD BECAUSE I'M USING A FORK AND WHAT I'M EATING CAN'T BE EATEN WITHOUT ATTENTION. BYE!

I love it. Your underestimating your self if you think its possible to hate this. Anyway, that sure was hectic. I really hate how Nate's family keeps assuming that Callen's a gold-digging whore. I really hate how it got so hectic but its not like "I hate it so much that I want you to change it!" its just like the hating of how one treats another in real life. Anyway, enough with my rambling and on with the reading. Great chap! Bye.

Its a little surprising that Nora's here with Josh and I feel like I just did a deja vu by saying this. I feel like I've already said this but I don't remember. Anyway, loved the chapter and I was literally saying "yes yes yes" along with Callen. I am so happy for them!

Trust me, not rushed. My stories are rushed, not yours. I...YAY...OH...YAY...OMG...OHMAGAH...AH! YAY! HE PROPOSED! YOU'D THINK I WAS THE ONE GETTING PROPOSED TO. BUT, YAY! CALLENS GETTING MARRIED! YAY! YAY! YAY! LOVELY CHAPTER! YAY! I'M JUMPING UP AND DOWN LIKE A PUPPY THAT'S ON A TRAMPOLINE BY THE WAY!

I have to say this. Somehow, it seems the girl always ends up with the badboy. Its really funny actually but somehow, its always the badboy. Loved the chapter and its just so sweet! I feel sad when they have to part. But luckily, now you don't really write that much of how sad she is when she's separated from Nate. I would fee sad with her too. Anyway, awesome chap mate! * Australian accent, mate* ;)

I never really read the stuff between the submit feedback buton and the the check list thingy. Now that I read it, I'm wondering if its ever been there before. Anyway, I loved the chapter, it was awesome. And yeah, I still don't like Nora. Of course I don't though. K, then. Bye!

I still don't really like how Nate's family's talking to Callen and stuff but I guess they're just protective. I'm a way to sensitive cancer so if it were me, I'd cry. I'm touchy about family matters sometimes. Like, talking about being taken away from your family or my family brings me to tears. Well, being taken from my parents to be exact. The chapter was really good though!

I'm sad I have to sleep. Loved this chapter! But I think Nate's family is going a little too harsh on Callen. Of course, if you made it easy, it would be boring wouldn't it? Never mind. Again! Chapter: AWESOME!