Yeah, I can't imagine a guy reading this. It'd be pretty weird but even weirder if he acted like me. Since I'm not a guy. But you might have some readers that are guys if(and no offense homosexuals! I have no grudge against you guys! Just making opinion!) they're gay. It works. *shrug* Loved the chap but I really do hate how stubborn Callen is. UGH! Marry him already for christs sake!

This chapter made me laugh again and again! Its so funny when josh and maddox comment about Callen and Nate. Its HILARIOUS! It doesn't feel rushed. I'm giggling like crazy becuz she finally confessed. FINALLY!

Liked this chapter a lot and I didn't think Ian was the flirty type or something. Like I never thought he was like this. It was funny though.

Awesome chap. It's sweet and calm. Very nice.

I still love Maddie. I think he's just adorable! This story is really dramatic by the way and you really know how to put in emotion! Awesome!

I like how its long. The more the merrier! Like they say. Great chap~!

Loved it a lot. Here's a question though. I don't really understand why Josh just up and abandoned Callen. It doesn't make sense. I loved the chap!

I loved it and I'm glad you made it longer. And don't worry about the sex scene. I pretty much suck at writing about kissing! Loved the chap!

She really is too stubborn for her own good. Why can't she just admit she's in love with her already! And you don't need to answer that bcuz it's just a rant of mine. Great chap!

So, I'm listening to "Hey there Delilah" while reading this whole entire story and I'll keep on doing it. What's funny is that sometimes I reach parts of the story that fit that part of the song. In the chapter, when Nate says "Do you have any fucking clue what you do to me?" only a second later the song goes "Oh, what you do to me." It's funny really. And in one part when Nate was saying he'll do anything to get to Callen the song went to that part when he says trains, cars and stuff. Very funny and weird but that song is completely meant for this story and I wouldn't be surprised if you made this story because of that song. Well, that's the end of my review for this little chappy(that wasn't little at all)! Great chap!

Again. Love it. I wouldn't stay up after midnight if I didn't like it.

Again, I loved this chapter. But really, Josh has absolutely no right to go calling her "my girl"!

I was seriously hurt by the conflict today. I had teary-eyes and I just made a rant on facebook how I didn't want to deal with the dramatic crap of dating. But I still liked the chapter. I got sad though.

I liked this chapter. It was sweet. No other way to put it but synonyms for sweet. Well maybe other ways.

Nate is so sweet! Weird that I used to have a crush named Nate. But not that weird bcuz it wasn't really a crush. And now I'm rambling! Great chap!