|Reviews for Arranged Marriage? Sucks for Him|
| Kris chapter 21 . 12/30/2014
Aiit!..d story was gud..a little 2 gud,twas sad dat darby had to die nd colt had 2 bcom an over proctective husband,charlie was d epitome of cuteness...nw d criticisms..did any1 notice dat d initial plot was rili dumb..she gets married 2 make him resposible..really?,den she initially wants hm 2 keep hs g.f's ..wats d point of d whole marriage,did any1 notice ds error in d storyline,den their love seemed a little 2 rushed nd unrealistic in d beginning,and initially everythn was fake and immature,their arguments,sleeping arrangement,their relationship 2...bt den as d story progressd it had a mre concrete storyline,they matured,d arguments made up wr mre real,nd deir love also bcame realistic,it had a gradual character darby bcame mature nd less fake..i loved dat ur writing bcame better..twas sad she had 2 die though...overall it's vry good
| Guest chapter 20 . 10/28/2014
I am speaking from the heart this was the worst story even just because she dies at the end u made me cry sorry
| Guest chapter 21 . 12/16/2013
Goddammit, I can't read it if you go and murder her. Glad I read the ending first.
| suoiruccandy chapter 21 . 10/4/2013
Wow, what an amazing story. Right from the plot line to the character arcs, this story was incredible. I've been searching for something worthwhile to read for a long time on here and I think I finally found one. This story could be turned into a serious novel, I'd hope you consider that. Fantastic job, loved it from beginning to end, even made me cry a little, hats off to you, making it to my favourites. :)
| cloned chapter 21 . 8/27/2013
Noooo how dare you make me cry! I loved this so much, about to check out the sequel.. I was seriously bawling my eyes out.. The tears and snot (ew) kind of crying! Thanks for writing :')
| Kill The Cliche chapter 21 . 8/1/2013
*Cry* so sad D:
| Kill The Cliche chapter 20 . 8/1/2013
Ok, I LOVE your story... BUT! I am mad D: YOU KILLED DARBY! D: D: D: but because your story is good I FORGIVE YOU! Im sorry if I seem insane... I AM :P :P :P :P Write more stories!
| desmond5tiny chapter 21 . 7/30/2013
God this is so good, I cried reading this.
| RbeccaE chapter 20 . 6/15/2013
well congrats (heavy sarcasm there) you got me to cry (very hard to do btw). really dont like u right now. but a good story, i guess, just wish i had seen that it was a tragedy before i started reading, i usually stay away from sad stuff.
| Guest chapter 21 . 4/28/2013
you hear that? that was my heart breaking into a million little pieces. /3
| Tragedy chapter 21 . 3/27/2013
I hate this story, but I love you for writing it.
| MyArmyLove chapter 21 . 3/14/2013
A-ma-zing. I'm literally crying. Best freaking story ever!
| sannie chapter 13 . 3/10/2013
"I think Adrian Monk's brother." He didn't get the reference and I dropped it.-perfection.
| GUADALUPE chapter 21 . 2/6/2013
I have not stopped crying. You are brilliant. PUBLISH THIS!
| GUADALUPE chapter 18 . 2/6/2013
And this is definetly the chapter were i start crying evrytime.