This is divergent all over again

The story is too rushed and toooo sad end..

Only story to make me cry. Ever.
Beautiful read, beautiful plot, and beautiful characters. I was hooked from the beginning. Cannot wait to dive into the sequel.

you know for a moment there I thought that you were going to set colton with sarah after darby death , she was like the only one nice around and well she did cared for people and stuff, sweet very sad story but well you did warn us

I'm literally crying my eyes out... Damn you and this sad sad story D: I love it! I can't wait to read the sequel!

Aiit!..d story was gud..a little 2 gud,twas sad dat darby had to die nd colt had 2 bcom an over proctective husband,charlie was d epitome of cuteness...nw d criticisms..did any1 notice dat d initial plot was rili dumb..she gets married 2 make him resposible..really?,den she initially wants hm 2 keep hs g.f's ..wats d point of d whole marriage,did any1 notice ds error in d storyline,den their love seemed a little 2 rushed nd unrealistic in d beginning,and initially everythn was fake and immature,their arguments,sleeping arrangement,their relationship 2...bt den as d story progressd it had a mre concrete storyline,they matured,d arguments made up wr mre real,nd deir love also bcame realistic,it had a gradual character darby bcame mature nd less fake..i loved dat ur writing bcame better..twas sad she had 2 die though...overall it's vry good

I am speaking from the heart this was the worst story even just because she dies at the end u made me cry sorry

Goddammit, I can't read it if you go and murder her. Glad I read the ending first.

Wow, what an amazing story. Right from the plot line to the character arcs, this story was incredible. I've been searching for something worthwhile to read for a long time on here and I think I finally found one. This story could be turned into a serious novel, I'd hope you consider that. Fantastic job, loved it from beginning to end, even made me cry a little, hats off to you, making it to my favourites. :)

Noooo how dare you make me cry! I loved this so much, about to check out the sequel.. I was seriously bawling my eyes out.. The tears and snot (ew) kind of crying! Thanks for writing :')

*Cry* so sad D:

Ok, I LOVE your story... BUT! I am mad D: YOU KILLED DARBY! D: D: D: but because your story is good I FORGIVE YOU! Im sorry if I seem insane... I AM :P :P :P :P Write more stories!

God this is so good, I cried reading this.

well congrats (heavy sarcasm there) you got me to cry (very hard to do btw). really dont like u right now. but a good story, i guess, just wish i had seen that it was a tragedy before i started reading, i usually stay away from sad stuff.

you hear that? that was my heart breaking into a million little pieces. /3