Uh oh... Now he is gonna find out she is dying... I wonder if he will still want to marry her knowing she is going to die...

OMG loved the getting down on one knee and proposing part! And when he explained why he liked the ring! That was adorable! Is he going to find out she's sick now?

AWw T_T, plz don't kill Darby T_T she's a good kid XD

uwah, I LOVE your story! :D anyways, I'm in suspense for when Darby tells Colton that she's dying. Keep up the good work :D. I know that this is totally random, but did you name Darby after Fitzwilliam Darby (Mr. Darby from Pride and Predjudice)?

nice story u have here. Update soon!

oh...one more thing. i didn't get the part where she woke up naked beside him. how'd that happen? O.o

I like drunk Colton... He is sweet... Can't wait to see what happens when they wake up... ;D

I love Colton! He's falling for her how sweet! She CANT die now! Does she have cancer?

cant wait till nxt chapter

They should just open up to each other... It would make things so much easier...

Aww! I love the last line! He makes her feel alive! Thats so sweet! She's kind of impulsive isnt she?

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Haha! I love her personality! She's funny! What is she sick from? POor Colton when she dies... if she dies...

I can tell this is going to be a very good read. I love Darby! Can't wait to see how she got naked...lol... ;D

Isn't all feedback kinda real? Darby's awesome and Colton's cool. I love thier relationship because she's like the outgoing crazy one even though she's sort of innocent like with the tequila shots. The story sounds like it's going to be like a walk to remember but more scandalous and funnier.

Hope this helps! Love the story!

I love her personality! Usually its a shy and timid girl or something like that but he's the shy-er one not her and its funny when she makes him laugh!