So I was leery about starting your story. Then I got hooked. I have to say that I read a lot and I never cry no matter how emotionally attached I've become to the characters. When I got to the last three chapters, I couldn't stop crying. I had to stop because I was crying so hard. It's a great story and I loved it.

This story made me cry. I started crying from chapter 19 cause i knew that she would die , i love this story, am kinda emotional

I've read my fair share of tragic stories but man this one takes the cake. In my culture it's customary to have an arranged marriage as in you meet suitors and if you like him and he likes you you get engaged and then you date each other. So this story really hit me hard and I really loved it. Thank You

I cried... I never cry for a story but wow really good story I'm glad you didn't make this story a Chiche by making her live but amazing story I loved it from the begging to the very end

Wow...even though D passes away I just loved it. I honestly don't think there could have been any other ending. Congratulations on finishing a really beautiful story.

the story was really an amazing one!

u writing style is just awesome...the end part really made me cry...TOTALLY AWESOME!

Excuse my language but, DAMN that was one amazing story. When the saying comes to mind, "I laughed...I cried..." most people kind of just move on, but to be honest that was me during this whole story. I started it thinking, 'Oh a story about an arranged Marriage... hmm it sucks for him because she must be completely resilient. Heh, awesome.' But those thoughts changed as soon as I read the first few chapters it was the whole thought, 'Oh shit she's going to die. When is she going to die dammit! Crap she fainted...'

Darby and Colton were a great pair. You wrote them with a beautiful chemistry and this was truly a pleasure to read. Although the last few chapters had me bawling my eyes out. Yes, I shall admit it, running nose, sniffles, and tears dripping down my face was abundant throughout the last three chapters. I am glad you posted this and this was one of those stories that someone reads and they automatically are thankful about their lives. This was something that made me sit back and think I'm glad I have what family I have now. What friends I am lucky to have now. This was that kind of story. I can not fathom any other words to describe it, but it was honestly one of those stories you remember for a long time.

Poor colton ;(

Aww their chemistry is amazing!

Amazing plot! Very creative!

That ending was so sad I had to try and read it through my tears.

OH MY GOD THAT STORY WAS AMAZING! i cried like a baby at the end, i wish she hadn't died! you are such a good writer and im definitely going to read the sequal

Great story, I'm so impressed! There was a minor detail I thought I'd mention, though - I don't remember which chapter it was, but Colton said something like "I'm sorry I'm not fucking Bryson Brandon!" Now, I admit I'm a bit slow, but my first interpretation was something completely different than what that sentence meant. I'd change it to "I'm sorry I'm not Bryson fucking Brandon!" or something, just to be absolutely crystal clear.

I also blame you for making me cry.

Thank you!

I loved it that's all. Until next time.

never mind disregard my previous review lol. I loved it but I'm still sad. Until next time.