Omg I love how upset Colton got. Yep I'm enjoying this and I feel Darby for slapping Colton. Until next time.

Omg its getting better. She can cook my type of chick. I love to cook. Darby is the girl but what happened to her clothes lol? Until next time.

I love love Darby she sure told Ashley what's up! Until next time.

I love Darby already she's going to be so much fun. What will she say next? Until next time.

I love your stories I read band geeks and the sequel this week its so good. You should get some reviews they will be generic but I loved it so much I want to go back and leave a review for all of them. Anyway this one seems very interesting and I can't wait to read more. Until next time.

This made me cry. it was so beautiful.

i absolutely LOVED this story, it was amazing, but you already know that.

my only complain would have to be that Colton fell in love rather quickly, like in a space of few days and that's not really realistic, maybe if you gave him more time in the begining it would be PERFECT.

The ending was absolutely heart wrenching and you are a really good writer, i love this story but i aready told you that :)

WOW! That story was amazing, I couldn't stop crying. The story was fantastic, well written and emotional. If you ever need a beta reader, hit me up, i've not yet created an acount on FP but i'm on fanfiction, under the name at the top. Yet again, amazing story

I just reread this story. :D And I have to say, I remember why this is on my favorites list again. It was so adorable and sad. I really wanted Darby to live, even though I knew she was already going to day. Charlie sounds wonderful, she sounds like someone with a great story? Hahahaa. Colton is just a big fawking WIN! LOl. I loved his character and I love how he didnt just fall apart after the death. He cared for and loved Charlie. I love your story. You have good grammer and spelling. I hardly saw any mistakes. And if you are considering a rewrite, DONT DO IT! xD No need. It is already beautifully written.

OMG what a wonderful story. i cried a lot, my nose is getting stuffy. i really wish she had lived! at the begining of the story it was so different and it turned out so great.

Oh i cried sooo much

I really liked the idea. I mean, I know arranged marriage between at least one "rich" family is pretty common (and trust me, I've read loads of those) but I thought you added a twist I've never read before (the girl being sick).

But I'm pretty disappointed the love factor isn't real. It sounds ridiculous to fall in love by the third day you meet someone. The stoy started out fine and I loved the flirtation between Darby and Colton, they had a lot of chemistry going for them but everything just went too fast and by the fourth or third day, Colton is already oh so romantically in love with Darby? Why would Darby be so different from all the other girls? The only convos they have together are just hormones talking.

He needs to get ashleys phone number out of his phone.

Through out this story i've been hanging on by my fingernails! I loved how at first Darby didn't care at all what Colton did but then they grew to care about each other. And i loved that Darby just had to tell Colton that she was going to die and that Colton just had to know. Then i cried when she didn't tell him how long but knew that he thought it was longer. Oh gosh now im crying again. And then in the hospital how she make's him leave because somehow she knows that she's going to die and just doesn't want him there. And then how she writes letters to him and charlie. I don't know how many times I've cried that chapter with big huge fat watery tears! I can understand how Colton is distanced from Charlie because she reminds him so much of Darby. This is one of my favorite stories to read over and over again. I can't wait till your next story.

wonderful story! it's so sad! made me want to cry :P but i forced myself not to (which was hard).. you made such a great story! even though the ending was so tragic, it is better than making up some miracle and having her live in the end (which would make it more of a cliché). so wonderful story! it was great! :D