Ahh you made me cry too!

But it was sweet, and i liked it.

Keep on writing

OH MY GOD I'M CRYING THIS IS SUCH A SWEET, DEPRESSING STORY. I'm SO glad Colton turned out to be a good dad like Darby wanted him to be. ;_;

Your story Is freaking brilliant! I LOVE IT! love it love it love it! I was so hooked that I stole my school's Internet pass code.., I was addicted :D okay kinda freaky ...but I really did enjoy it and there's nothing better than finding such a good story written by a cleary very talented author.

Im mad you just killed ha! Omgee she was so chill and stuff and you just killed her. You made me cry, no flex. They were so cute together

I hate you but only for making me cry so much. I loved this story even with the ending it had. I would of loved to see Darby live but you did the ending justice.

i re-read this story all the time and i cry every single time.

wow. best read for a long time

Oh my goodness. This story was really good. I felt so emotionally attached to the characters and now i'm crying because she'd dead and oh... poor Colton.

Awesome job.

This is one of the good ones I've read here in fictionpress. I love how the story ended as it's supposed to end-with Darby being dead. I sure was sad to read her go. I just don't like how this story was inundated with curses. But other than that, this story is worth nearly every minute of my time.

How sad! I really LOVED the story! I cried! Hope Charlie doesn't have the disease. Hope there is also a sequel!. LOveD LOVED!

The story started off alittle bumpy to me. I didnt like how they just seemed to wake up the third day of knowing each other and just know they were in love. It felt kinda of rushed. But I definetely belive it got better as it went along. It took everything in me not to cry when I read the epilogue.. I loved the story idea and I loved Dar.. Overall , great job! :D

Sister Kitty

that was really sad. i feel like crying now. what caused you to write something like this. it was a good story, just so sad. youre a good writer, i can see you being famous one day.

A very touching story, but I have to say what made it a turn-off was the constant use of the word "fuck". To be honest, I skipped to the end after chapter 10, because it was really getting grating my nerves. If this was a book in the book store, this would be a reason for me not to buy it.

AWW, look at Colton being all stressed out. I wonder how will he react if she dies? And I love shrimp fried rice! Now...I'm hungry. Gr...lol.

This was so cute! I loved the reasons why he chose that ring!

But the pacing still seems fast. Love? Already? Like I said their relationship doesn't seem ready for that. But then again..maybe it's just me. And the chapter, like I said, was still very cute!