|Reviews for MIRACLE|
| Princess-anna57 chapter 1 . 12/30/2009
You have a beautiful writing style! I love this! Keep it up! :)
| SongMiko chapter 1 . 12/30/2009
I love what you did with this, it tells a clear story. It has a message and great imagery. I don't know if you want any constructive criticism but I'm going to give some any way. )
1) When you said " My heart feels heavy, and.." I think you should follow with another discribing word that fits with the image you were about to write. I would use some thing like broken or hurt.
2) The formatting could use some work. Some lines are together and some are not. Also you never capitalized anything. Was that on purpose?
Over all good job! I'd give it a 7/10
| WriterOnTheMove chapter 1 . 12/30/2009