Reviews for To Thick to See
awanida chapter 1 . 12/31/2009
oh so sad like most of your poems. i really like it though the way you express your thoghts and feelings is unique i like that about you keep going
Princess-anna57 chapter 1 . 12/30/2009
There's a typo in the 1st line "buy" should be "but" I think, and once again the rhyming felt forced to me in places, but great job overall. :) Keep writing!

~Anna~ _