Reviews for Ritual
Circus Folk chapter 1 . 1/2/2010
It is a great poem for the sake of pure sensory input. It really examines that situation and conveys its importance onto the reader.
Kiya14 chapter 1 . 1/1/2010
Wow! That reminded me so much of my first 'real' holiday. I remember standing by the sea at sunset (it was India by the way) and it felt just like that!