Reviews for Their New Year
Yusuf chapter 1 . 6/24/2010
Simple and sweet... and adorable. The urgency to get the new years kiss, and at the moment the lips meet, thats when time stops.

tatertotlove chapter 1 . 4/6/2010
Loved it! You rock Jacky! Hehe. :D
pinkguppie chapter 1 . 12/31/2009
Again very cute and sweet :)
rockettwriter4 chapter 1 . 12/31/2009
very discriptive and i liked the imagery!

yes, i would work on correcting it but you said you were in a hurry 2 get it out there in the open, so its fine.

please read and review stuff on my page, if you have time.

i just wrote a few new poems, oneof which is called "the best day" grammar, puncuation, and it will be even better! keep it up!
Medusa's.Protege chapter 1 . 12/31/2009
Your good at writing these stories! This was adorable!