Simple and sweet... and adorable. The urgency to get the new years kiss, and at the moment the lips meet, thats when time stops.

~Yusuf

Loved it! You rock Jacky! Hehe. :D

Again very cute and sweet :)

very discriptive and i liked the imagery!

yes, i would work on correcting it but you said you were in a hurry 2 get it out there in the open, so its fine.

please read and review stuff on my page, if you have time.

i just wrote a few new poems, oneof which is called "the best day" grammar, puncuation, and it will be even better! keep it up!

Your good at writing these stories! This was adorable!