Reviews for Back To Square One
PlatinumPrincess1 chapter 2 . 2/3/2010
This is a very cute story so far. I can't wait to read more.
Vroooommmmmm chapter 1 . 1/7/2010
well...this is an awesome piece...i have encountered...a big applause...liked the detailing, descriptive,fits your genre,ur a grammatical hero,good sizable paragraphs, and interesting read...hats of...though you have lot of scope for improvement...
Miz-KTakase chapter 2 . 1/7/2010
Hunh...

Nicely done on this story. I expect more in the next chapter.
white wolf97 chapter 1 . 1/7/2010
cool, interesting. althougth you could pick more interesting names, no offence or anything. could you read mine, im afraid no one likes it i need to know whats wrong besides spelling errors
sealednectar chapter 1 . 1/7/2010
I like it so far!:)

'of course do to his reputation' -due

'about her respond'-response

'let out a light sighed'-sigh

'think that is ridicules,'-ridulous

'As of females,'-as for
to fall or to jump chapter 2 . 1/7/2010
Do you speak Italian? Hmm.. maybe she shouldnt have left the dinner the guy sounded really hot! Trent likes her doesnt he? And Conrad? Trent's perfect she should marry him!
WriterOnTheMove chapter 2 . 1/7/2010
i really like the overall idea of the story, there are a few grammatical mistakes, but nothing too overwhelming. Keep up the good work, and keep writing. I would love a few reviews myself too please :)
HelgaBertoni chapter 2 . 1/7/2010
Loved it, update soon!
XxCaptainKoalaxX chapter 1 . 1/1/2010
Great story...! Hope you can UPDATE SOON;)
HelgaBertoni chapter 1 . 12/31/2009
Love it so far, update soon!
to fall or to jump chapter 1 . 12/31/2009
Is Duncan the guy? He's on people magazine? Really great start cant wait until you write more!
Narsha chapter 1 . 12/31/2009
This looks like a really cute story. I like it so far.

- Narsha
Meeesha chapter 1 . 12/31/2009
Fun set up. :D And it's not a cliched kind of opening, with her having to get married. I want to see where it goes. Please and thank you!
EmmaWoodhouse88 chapter 1 . 12/31/2009
This story sones great! I hope you continue!
I.Read.And.Write.Not.Much chapter 1 . 12/31/2009
Please continue this. I liked it. )
16 | Page 1 2 Next »