|Reviews for It's Lucky Charms Time!|
| Julietish chapter 1 . 8/10/2014
A Drop of Romeo also reviewed this story of yours! Here's the review:
Every once in a while, a girl needs to read a lighthearted, cute romance story that doesn't rouse any existential quandaries. Sure, big, heart-wrenching novels are great, but little fluff pieces like "It's Lucky Charms Time!" by Emedea are what really keep us sane.
Mostly-vegan-animal-lover Charlie is neck-deep in a tragedy when the story begins: Her hamster, Mario, has died. She's frantic with concern for her furry friend, and no one will help her out-not her germaphobe roomie Phoebe nor her weirdly stressed out boyfriend Jason. Jason is trying to take Charlie on a date, but her grief for Mario and his lack of understanding cause the date to end in heartbreak. So, Charlie spends the next day lying in bed crying-because of Mario, of course. She's determined to deny her sadness over Jason, but he's not letting her go so easily.
Throughout the story, the narrator maintains a lighthearted voice. I laughed out loud several times because of Charlie's oblivious antics and inner musings. It's nice to read a female character who's not cynical and bitter all the time. I admit I'm not a completely objective reviewer; I may have a soft spot for her non-meat eating animal-loving ways. Jason's a great character, too. Though cliche at times, he perfectly embodies the role of a rational man in love with a madwoman.
So while this one-shot won't be breaking any barriers or changing lives, it's the perfect read if you're looking for a little pick-me-up or just have a few extra minutes.
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/15/2014
this is my favourite story!
| APassionForReadingAndWriting chapter 1 . 12/7/2013
Haha! I love this :)
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/20/2013
Thank god! She saw the light! I almost wanted to smack the cheese outta Charlie. Thank goodness.
| AlysonSerenaStone chapter 1 . 8/12/2013
I really loved the last line. I really didn't see why you were going to edit this. It's really good the way it is. Great work!
| fantasybookworm2012 chapter 1 . 7/26/2013
Oh... Duh. I don't know why butninwas confused as to what part of LC weren't vegan. I'm stupid. Most of them. Marshmallows and the milk.
| D chapter 1 . 5/6/2013
Loved itt! :D
| heal me forever chapter 1 . 12/7/2012
| theKnobblyKneedWriter chapter 1 . 3/18/2012
well i loved it :)
| MysticDagger chapter 1 . 7/31/2011
best breakup makeup story ever and mario deserves a pat on the back for being the backbone of the whole plot!
| SpawnMeister666 chapter 1 . 12/1/2010
Another great story. Your ability to write simple yet funny situations seems to know no bounds!
| balloonfista chapter 1 . 6/21/2010
Awm it wasn't horrible although I liked the Jerry one better! But this was so cute :)
| Kyllex chapter 1 . 5/11/2010
I liked it! I love the name Charlie for a girl, it's one of my favorites. Jason is sweet and I can't believe Charlie got so mad at him for making that romantic message with the candles! But I guess she was in a bad mood, so that makes sense. But still. I had a feeling he was going to propose. (:
This was cute, I like "Phobie" (haha) and Bubble Jacket Barry. I used to hate those jackets, too! My mom always made me wear them. Ugh.
LUCKY CHARMS ARE INDEED MAGICALLY DELICIOUS.
Nice job, I enjoyed it very much.
| starlit x sky chapter 1 . 2/6/2010
This is most definitely not horrible.
It's awesome! So cute and really funny too, I loved the whole hamster thing!
| Seoulishly chapter 1 . 1/5/2010
Aw, it's nor horrible! You're way too hard on yourself. I'll definitely be voting for you!