LOVED IT!

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Every once in a while, a girl needs to read a lighthearted, cute romance story that doesn't rouse any existential quandaries. Sure, big, heart-wrenching novels are great, but little fluff pieces like "It's Lucky Charms Time!" by Emedea are what really keep us sane.
Mostly-vegan-animal-lover Charlie is neck-deep in a tragedy when the story begins: Her hamster, Mario, has died. She's frantic with concern for her furry friend, and no one will help her out-not her germaphobe roomie Phoebe nor her weirdly stressed out boyfriend Jason. Jason is trying to take Charlie on a date, but her grief for Mario and his lack of understanding cause the date to end in heartbreak. So, Charlie spends the next day lying in bed crying-because of Mario, of course. She's determined to deny her sadness over Jason, but he's not letting her go so easily.

Throughout the story, the narrator maintains a lighthearted voice. I laughed out loud several times because of Charlie's oblivious antics and inner musings. It's nice to read a female character who's not cynical and bitter all the time. I admit I'm not a completely objective reviewer; I may have a soft spot for her non-meat eating animal-loving ways. Jason's a great character, too. Though cliche at times, he perfectly embodies the role of a rational man in love with a madwoman.

So while this one-shot won't be breaking any barriers or changing lives, it's the perfect read if you're looking for a little pick-me-up or just have a few extra minutes.

this is my favourite story!

Haha! I love this :)

Thank god! She saw the light! I almost wanted to smack the cheese outta Charlie. Thank goodness.

I really loved the last line. I really didn't see why you were going to edit this. It's really good the way it is. Great work!

Oh... Duh. I don't know why butninwas confused as to what part of LC weren't vegan. I'm stupid. Most of them. Marshmallows and the milk.

Loved itt! :D

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww

well i loved it :)

best breakup makeup story ever and mario deserves a pat on the back for being the backbone of the whole plot!

Another great story. Your ability to write simple yet funny situations seems to know no bounds!

Spawny

Awm it wasn't horrible although I liked the Jerry one better! But this was so cute :)

I liked it! I love the name Charlie for a girl, it's one of my favorites. Jason is sweet and I can't believe Charlie got so mad at him for making that romantic message with the candles! But I guess she was in a bad mood, so that makes sense. But still. I had a feeling he was going to propose. (:

This was cute, I like "Phobie" (haha) and Bubble Jacket Barry. I used to hate those jackets, too! My mom always made me wear them. Ugh.

LUCKY CHARMS ARE INDEED MAGICALLY DELICIOUS.

Nice job, I enjoyed it very much.

This is most definitely not horrible.

It's awesome! So cute and really funny too, I loved the whole hamster thing!