|Reviews for OneGirl|
| Belenus82 chapter 22 . 2/9
I'm about half way through this chapter, and I just have to say that Jessie has purchased her own private Isle right-smack-dab in the middle of that river in Egypt.
| ErzaKnightwalker1376 chapter 78 . 12/5/2013
when are you coming back?! i am addicted to this story and i'm all kinds of sad that it just stops here...
| ErzaKnightwalker1376 chapter 60 . 12/5/2013
ummmm aside from the very last few sentences, i actually again thought this was a cute chapter.
| ErzaKnightwalker1376 chapter 59 . 12/5/2013
methinks this was a cute chapter... and i'd agree with Rachel on this one, it was too bad they hadn't been together long enough for her to say she loved Jessie again.
| ErzaKnightwalker1376 chapter 6 . 12/4/2013
'tis highly amusing. and imma say now, i actually made a singer/onegirl playlist on my phone's mp3 player (of the songs that Rachel sings, like the ones she put on the cd for jessie at the end of singer and whatnot)
| ErzaKnightwalker1376 chapter 3 . 12/4/2013
methinks you should be all of the above when it comes to someone forming a harem, 'specially if said harem is anything like Rachel's.
| TheJaded92 chapter 78 . 11/23/2013
Goo story and I liked reading it.
| Pictureme chapter 77 . 11/8/2013
Hoping to spur a new chapter with this 600th review.
| Pictureme chapter 78 . 11/8/2013
so I am confused; one is older than the other? which one is the rocker and which one is the red haired girl? ):O But I have to say that red is really a repressed sexually. Did she have an intimate relationship with Derek or was the rocker that last such person? Kind of what some of the backstory on the last two years of Jessie's life.
| Alluring Shadows chapter 78 . 9/17/2013
I don't really have anything to CC, honestly. I'm generally not too picky on grammar and plot crud anyways, and this whole story is fairly solid in all of it. And I'm just not that advanced in the workings of grammar and plots to know what the hell I'd even be talking about if I did have any complaints. xP
So as much as I loathe giving these kinds of reviews:
NEED MORE. I wanna see Jessica completely smashed, if that's where you were heading, and I wanna know if Derek pops up anymore. D; God I'm fangirling hard right now. But It's cool, because this story completely earned it. ... Because fangirling can totally be excused.
Anyways, I love this. Just. Aaaagh. x3
| Guest chapter 78 . 8/7/2013
| LostMyPassword chapter 78 . 8/3/2013
YAY! Another post! I was afraid you had died or something... I thought this chapter was cute actually; and I always like a bit of fluff:D Plus, it's an update!
| DancingKitten97 chapter 78 . 8/3/2013
So yesterday I finished reading Singer, and I spent last night plus this morning reading this story. I must say, brilliant work! The plotline is captivating, and although the prologues were short, the first chapters drew my attention instantly. There was a moment before I began reading them that I thought they would be cliche or something, but now I realize that I was completely wrong. Both Singer and OneGirl are original, creative, and a wonderful read! I can't wait for your next update!
| The Eternally Heartbroken chapter 78 . 8/2/2013
Yay! New chappie!
Despite what you say, I rather enjoy these "conversation/exposition chapters" every once and a while. Allows for nice, fluffy dialogue. Either way, I'm happy to see a new chapter!
| Iza Alves chapter 78 . 8/2/2013
omg sksiasudahsduhua finally :)