|Reviews for OneGirl|
| Leigh Kaze chapter 73 . 12/14/2011
Your writing, Tah, is absolutely amazing! I found Singer off someone's page, I honestly don't remember whose by now, and let me tell you this. I got hooked and follow you here. Sorry by the way for never reviewing on Singer. It was completed when I picked it up and I was more focus on finding what happens to Rachel and Jessie. But here I am, giving you a review of the best story I ever had the pleasure to read. You have the style down and I hope to the Gods that you never put this story down until you finish it. I'll get upset if you do, Tah, like my friends do when I stop writing a story they love and I love this story. :D
| DreamPyre chapter 73 . 12/7/2011
Hm. Well, cheering for Rachel, even if I think Jessica's right that she's going to get herself in trouble at some point. Somehow I suspect that even if Derek leaves everything alone now, he won't keep his mouth shut about why, and then his friends will have something to say about it...
(Also, I think this and Singer are quite literally the second romance story/series I've ever willingly read in my life. I'd congratulate you, but I'm kind of busy being vaguely bewildered about what this story has possibly done to my brain to achieve this effect.)
On a side note, have you ever heard of Emilie Autumn? Purely because "Schitzopheliac" reminded me of Opheliac.
| The1DarkMarbleEyes chapter 73 . 12/6/2011
"Mess with the bitch, you get the bite." My new favorite phrase... :) I love this chapter. ;} [and I think I shall tattoo that quote, if that's all right 3 ]
| Amanandia chapter 73 . 12/4/2011
... O_O I haven't reviewed on this in forever. Have I ever reviewed OneGirl? ... Now I feel bad. *headdesk*
I've still been following it - and because I forgot to review consistently (*facepalm*), I'm so friggin' happy that Rachel and Jessie are back together, Derek is an asshole, and go Rachel! Give 'im good reasons to be pissed off! 8DD
*cough* Ahem. I think I'm done now. Still in love with these two. They're just so damn cute together. 3
... Which reminds me that I should draw them sometime. o_O I'll have to work on that...
Until next time! :D
| romancejunky chapter 73 . 12/4/2011
While it has taken me quite some time to read over your works up to this point I can say that I an quite enjoying your story regarding Rachel and Jessie. With the exception of small corrections every now and then to use the correct words like ever instead of every you are doing well writing this. I have enjoyed your stories when they turn into Rachel looking into nearly illegal actions to help Jessie when she is in trouble regarding past boyfriends as well as those who wish her harm. Your imaginative fixes to these problems never cease to amaze me and I enjoy reading about the reactions of those who are on the receiving end of said punishments. I look forward to seeing how this stories develops further and you are on my alert list and will be on my favorites once it is complete. I may give you a more complete opinion of your stories later but for now I will simply say that you are someone that I look forward to reading for quite a while.
| AnyMousse chapter 73 . 11/28/2011
"Mess with the bitch, you get the bite. AWESOME! Way to go Rachel! Way to stick it to the jerk! Damn!
Another fine update Tah. Love it as always. Can't wait for me. Hoping and praying Rachel doesn't cause to much more trouble. It could wind up biting her in the ass.
| proven.innocent chapter 73 . 11/28/2011
So..yeah..Rachel needs to exist. Pretty sure I'm in love with her awesome-ness. I've spent literally all day reading this on my super small phone screen. Congrats, your story stole the last day of my Thanksgiving break and probably ruined my vision. Better have a good ending, damn it. Keep it up :P
| Curiously Insane chapter 73 . 11/28/2011
Haha, this chapter had me giggling the whole way through xD I love the absolute glee Rachel felt towards putting Derek back in his place. Awesome chapter as always, and I'm glad that you're updating more often now :D I've certainly missed Jessie and Rachel :3
| Anon723723723 chapter 73 . 11/28/2011
That. Was. Awesome. And brilliant. Go Rachel.
| moon chapter 73 . 11/28/2011
Rachels very creative! n Dereks such a coward, Jessie has really bad taste in men, she should stick to Rachel forever haha
I loved the last phrase! epic!
| LuxVenus chapter 73 . 11/28/2011
| earthserpent chapter 73 . 11/28/2011
wooooo keep going. :)
| Tears of a Dreamer chapter 73 . 11/28/2011
WHERE'S MY DRUNKEN JESSIE SEX THO. lol jk. Good chapter. (: Kick his goddamn face in, Rachel. Legally.
| Sillabubwolfy chapter 72 . 11/23/2011
i love this story! update soon please 3
| Anon723723723 chapter 72 . 11/22/2011
I'm sure Rachel will find him, last name or no. She could just stalk him if she really wanted to.