Reviews for OneGirl |
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KittyKat chapter 60 . 10/21/2010 I absolutely love this story! I found it a couple of days ago and have been reading (and forcing all of my friends to read) it ever since! Then I got up to date yesterday and was all like angst today because I didn't have anything to read in college and then UPDATE so thank you thank you thank you! Anyhoo... The story is awesome! It's so hard to find good yuri but I think your plot, writing style, characterisation and the characters themselves (my friend is taking the utter piss outta me because I may have developed a tiny crush on Rachel) are remarkable. I adore the chemistry between Rachel and Jessie and I cannot wait to see what you have in store for them! I hope you update soon, Kitty :) |
AnyMousse chapter 60 . 10/20/2010 Aww. Poor Tah; struck by writer's block. I HATE when that happens. Cute chapter regardless; I love how they're just being real companionable with each other now. I also thought it was amusing that this time around, Jessie seems to want...that thing Rachel was going to ask instead of the other way around. Or...something like that. :-) Anyways... Good job. Hope your writer's block clears. Good luck. Until the next update. |
Tears of a Dreamer chapter 60 . 10/20/2010 ... WHY? MY EMAIL IS NOT SENDING ME ALERTS ANY MORE D If I hadn't seen you mention you updated, I wouldn't have known. WHY, EMAIL? WHY? Anyways... Lovely chapter, as always. |
sharon-cooley chapter 59 . 10/14/2010 Really good chapter. I love the cupcake idea. Do you mind if I use that on Valentine's Day? |
AnyMousse chapter 59 . 10/13/2010 Long and rambling? What are you talking about? That chapter was adorable! I loved when Jessie came in and shyly presented Rachel with roses, causing her to blush.I also loved the last line, where Rachel says she wants to tell Jessie she loves her again. Aw! Until the next update (if I can stand it that long). |
Kitmaro chapter 58 . 10/13/2010 M that was a good read after a long day. Light and warm in this one. Later. |
Slightly chapter 58 . 10/13/2010 Double rainbow? What does it mean? lol :P i love that video. But yes, this was a wonderful chapter as always, even if it WAS a tad bit late...still though, i cant even act mad, i love this story TOO DARN MUCH. |
gaia-x-goddess chapter 58 . 10/13/2010 Double rainbow. Lol :P xx |
AnyMousse chapter 58 . 10/11/2010 Omg. I loved the double rainbow reference. That was hilarious and brilliant. Way to go Tah. Very cute, heartwarming chapter which had me smiling all the way through. Until the next update. |
Tears of a Dreamer chapter 58 . 10/11/2010 IT'S A DOUBLE RAINBOW! lolol I freakin' love you. This is why we're engaged. SHIT'S SO INTENSE. |
gaia-x-goddess chapter 57 . 10/2/2010 Angst... gotta love it xD |
Slightly chapter 57 . 10/2/2010 Aww, God... DX i got teary eyed. That was wodnerfully heartbreaking though xD thanks for another wonderful chapter. |
Kitmaro chapter 57 . 10/2/2010 Hmm clearing the air is good for them. |
CuriouslyInsane chapter 57 . 10/1/2010 I had tears in my eyes from reading this... What, me, a sook? No way man . Well-written, as always. And just a quick note about the song, Dear God. You've managed to make me think of Rachel and Jessie whenever I listen to it. Not that it's necessarily a bad thing, just that it too makes me a bit teary... And it's now probably one of my most listened to songs... Top job, as always |
AnyMousse chapter 57 . 10/1/2010 Wow. What a heartfelt and sad chapter. You wrote it beautifully and made me feel for both characters. I love how we finally get a chance to see Rachel's vulnerable side. It's not like we haven't seen it before, earlier in this story and in Singer, but in this chapter, it was more prominent. Well done. I look forward to the next chapter. |