Reviews for OneGirl |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Crap I couldn't get on here with all the error messages and colege. But readin' some good chapters is always good. Later Tah. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, Dear God was one of the songs my girlfriend sent to me while I was away. I was listening to it just several minutes before reading this chapter. Cool.:D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw... suspense :S xx |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh wow. The ending. That was beautiful, sad, heart warming and heart breaking all at the same time. Well done. I look forward to the next update. |
![]() ![]() ![]() What a place to cut it off. RAWR. Lovely, as always. Gotta love these two. |
![]() ![]() So like, I really don't actually have a critique for you at all, I just really wanted to say I love your stories so much and you are an excellent writer. |
![]() ![]() ![]() thank you for another installment... im really happy cuz i was FINALLY able to see one of the fan arts on your page of rachel awesome! cant wait for more. thank you for helping me escape every week & taking me away. keep up the good work.. your fan SCHATZI87 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well. Looks like the bassist is going to work out just fine. And even though I knew Rachel was taking it slow because she promised Jenny she would, I knew taking it slow would kill her. So very entertaining there. Until next time. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sure, Tah. Sure. (Actually, the errors prevented me from reading it for a while, but I'ma pretend to blame you anyways.) |
![]() ![]() ![]() My imagination of this scene left me totally hormone raged. And now they have to take it slow. Tah, you suck. |
![]() ![]() Oh wow...I think that has to be one of my favorite chapters :) they are just too cute together xD i love how comfortable Jessie is around Rachel now :p Great Work as always! Cant wait till the next chaper :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() *squeal* This chapter is SO ADORABLE! I can't believe it; Rachel is keeping her promise to Jenny and in so doing, it's like she's matured all of a sudden. Great character development. I also love the fact that Jessie has gone from being the shy, innocent girl to the teasing, frisky girl. She's come a long way. Great character development for her too. You're doing great Tah; keep up the good work. Until next time. Oh, I love Eachel's plan, especially the parts about wooing Jessie until she's as crazy about Rachel as Rachel is of her, and the plan to win her over and convince her that they should be together forever. BIG AW |
![]() ![]() ![]() dhtehgtejrteg I love these two wtf. And RACHEL. Omg Rachel. D~ But I won't call her a toy. I've learned my lesson after Lexi. |
![]() ![]() ![]() hey love this new chapter! Thanks for taking me away & helping me escape once again... i love the Jessie & Rachel are together again.. cant wait for a new love scene. & yes you did way better the last ones than you think you did. & yes i am one of the ones that no matter how many times i try to see the fan art i cannot see it . o so frustrating! Cant wait for the next installment |
![]() ![]() Awesome chapter! and my thoughts: -They just keep getting cuter together _ and Onegirl seems, to me at least, to feel a bit more mature than Singer was. I guess it makes sense that now they're young adults and not really teenagers anymore *tearful sniff* also, this chapter seemed a bit scattered to me, but i liked how Rachel pointed out that they had to move a bit more slowly. Overall really really amazing job as always, I'm just looking forward to seeing where the story goes :D (praying for happy ever after) thanks again |