Reviews for OneGirl
A Typical Aquarius chapter 51 . 9/9/2010
Yay, Jessie and Rachel finally got back together! Like, really together, without anyone in the way. It's about time! I'm so happy!

On another note, I'm sorry about your legs. I also got sunburnt on the back of my knees when I went to the beach this summer, and it's a bitch.

Well, luck writing. Can't wait for the next update!

~Jynxie
gaia-x-goddess chapter 50 . 9/5/2010
Oh! Has Derek (tss) heard the news? :P x
CandiiLand chapter 50 . 9/4/2010
Cliffhanger! I hate them... But I loved the myspace video.
CandiiLand chapter 49 . 9/4/2010
Ah, made my morning! Had a crappy day and these updates put a HUGE smile on my face:)I wish Jessie would break up with Derek already though.
AnyMousse chapter 50 . 9/4/2010
Oh no! Cliff hanger! Why Tah, why? Oh well; nice work as usual. Eagerly anticpiating the next update.
LyBhing chapter 50 . 9/4/2010
Love it. :D I don't know whether to feel bad to Derek though...

Mwaha. Sorry with the formspring again? xDD
Slightly chapter 50 . 9/4/2010
Aw! _ memories from singer *happy sigh*

And its about time Jessie!
Eindi chapter 50 . 9/4/2010
You leave off on Jessie answering Derek's call...AND THEN SAY NO UPDATE MONDAY? ARGH! *sulk* Don't get TOO horribly sunburned that you miss the next update after! You have me more addicted to this story/series than the several half-finished-being-read *published* books lying around me atm..grats p Some published books should be used as hamster bedding, imo...not to point any fingers at any popular book-to-movie series /end rant.

On a more constructive note-it's really impressive how you make the thought patterns of both Jessie and Rachel differ, when you write each of them in first person. They each have their own individual sound, which is probably a large factor in making this story so enjoyable.

-Zirq
L.I. Night chapter 49 . 9/3/2010
Love this story one of my favorites keep updating.
Slightly chapter 49 . 9/2/2010
Such a sweet chapter, i loved how genuine and special this one felt, and congrats on 300 reviews cause you totally deserve them and more. looking forward to next update!
AnyMousse chapter 49 . 9/1/2010
Weird chapter? Tah, this chapter was awesome. I loved it; it had everything: cute flirting between Rachel and Jessie; Rachel's love for "my little red-head" and Rachel being turned on by every little thing Jessie did (which was hilarious).

I felt bad for Rachel towards the end; I hope Jessie sticks to her word and dumps Derek.

Until the next update.
CandiiLand chapter 48 . 8/28/2010
I am so happy I could cry. CRY. But really, the Rachel/Jessie interaction fills my stomach with butterflies.
gaia-x-goddess chapter 48 . 8/27/2010
N'aw. How I love having tons of chapters to read in one go :) ESPECIALLY WHEN THEY FINALLY KISS (y) xD
AnyMousse chapter 48 . 8/26/2010
*squeals* Oh my gosh! This chapter was adorable! I nearly died at the last line. So beautifully written.

Nice job as always Tah; can't wait for the next update.
Slightly chapter 47 . 8/24/2010
I love happy-mood Rachel. :D this chapter felt a little short but it still made my day _ cant wait for update! :)
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