Awesome chapter! :D

Poor Jessie, that must suck.

And Derek is so oblivious.

:)

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Hi,

You obviously need some help with the French translation, I'm sorry to say that your sentences are wrong.

"Vous êtes ma fille, aussi : You are my daughter, too" See, it is weird, isn't? I don't know if I should cry or laugh... I'm laughing actually, sorry.

"C'est bien : It's good" It isn't so bad but it doesn't make much sense in what Jessie is trying to say.

I'll translate those few sentences, feel free to use them or not.

"You're my girl, too." " Tu m'appartiens, aussi" which literally means "You are mine, too or you belong to me, too"

"That's alright" " Ne t'inquiète pas" which literally means " Don't worry about it" of course there is so many synonyms and varieties but this one can be intimate and casual. I can provide you with other examples if you want.

Anyway, I'm glad that Jessie spoke in French, I hope she will do it again Rachel will certainly not mind :p

Great job on this chapter it was cute(especially the ending) i just hope something exciting happens soon.

amazing! i was grinning like some maniac when i finished reading this chapter. AWESOME. :D

Rachel and Jessie need to get together! It's driving me nuts. And I wish Jessie would break up with her annoying boyfriend already.

Okay, first off: major (and I'm talking MAJOR) squealing over what Jessie said in French and two, if there was any more sexual tension between them, I think they would explode. Or Rachel would anyways.

Nice job as always.

Until next time...

you do know that hasta luego chica mia and stuff is spanish not french righ?

Great job, as usual! :D I loved this chapter. Rachel and Jessie are so cute together.

In case you hadn't realize, there were a few typos.

One was when Rachel told Jessie she didn't know that Kyle had been in the picture that long, she said "I think you were only with Kyle a couple of months." I think that should be "thought".

And the other one was right after Rachel said hasta luego. "But, hell, she didn't speak French, so I wasn't too terribly concerned about it." French should be Spanish.

:)

I can't wait for the next chapter; I'm pretty sure I'm completely addicted to this story!

Cant wait till the next chap. Aghh, Jessies falling for her...again. hmm i wonder what jessie thought bout that close encounter.

Uhm... in your author notes could you put the translations they're meant to mean in English please?

I don't speak french but I thought that was hot? :) Your writing is very exquisite. You decipher the character's feelings very well. I salute you.

*BOW* Hahaha. :))

Aw. That chapter was really cute. I loved the part about Jessie saying the dreams had gone from physical to romantic. It shows that she's actually falling for Rachel again, not just being attracted to her physically. Now, if she could just admit it to herself. Until next time...

you are an EXTRAORDINARY writer! update soon! ;D

N'aaw that's cute :') x

Just finished reading Singer and this. :) I really liked how it's going, even when they broke up..