Reviews for OneGirl |
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![]() ![]() ![]() -squeal- Oh my gosh! Did you have to end there? That way? The suspense is going to kill me; great job! Oh my; until Friday... P.S. Yay Jessie. Give in. Give in. GIVE IN! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yes good new chap! Be prepared, my revieuws suck and are boring and you're going to get them with every new chap. Anyways, it was great again! just keep writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I knew it wasn't canon! :3 I just don't like the thought that she'd cheat. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice chapter. Eagerly awaiting the next update. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm so glad your finally back... even though i don't know you i was worried about you cuz im used to getting regular update. hope things get better & know that you have avid fans awaiting your next installment. once again thank you for taking me away! :D Hope life gets better for you & soon you aren't so stressed out and can enjoy life's small pleasures once more :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Is Jessie actually getting horny? |
![]() ![]() ![]() She should just get over her denial soon. :) Good chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() bahaha best chapter ever :P |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hehehehe. Well, "we're just friends," or not, I don't really believe Jessie's assertion. Especially once she climbs into her bed. Dang; nice plot device there. Good work; I eagerly await the next update. |
![]() ![]() ![]() FANTASTIC! Too bad it's so late but... Just keep updating! (I MEAN IT!) |
![]() ![]() ![]() N'aw Rachel, that's so cute. :( Aw. x |
![]() ![]() ![]() So, 132 chapters of stories in 4 days, I think that's a new record Just wanted to drop you a line saying that I stumbled upon 'Singer' a few days ago, and since then I've practically devoured these stories like fried rice (which, believe me, is VERY fast). I love the characterisation and perspective changes. In stories like this I often wonder what the other side is thinking and feeling, which is why I'm loving seeing both Rachel and Jessie's point of view. I also love your writing itself. There's a fair bit of detail, but it's not overwhelming or overworked, and the way you write each character is absolutely wonderful. I feel like I'm reading their diary or something, because it feels like they're speaking right to me. Anyway *ends rambling* Wonderful story |
![]() ![]() ![]() This update was the highlight of my morning... considering I should be sleeping right now... The necklace and rose made me so happy inside. :) This is the only story I constantly check for updates, I feel like a stalker constantly checking your profile for SOMETHING. I can't wait for the next update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() YAY, finally an update! I have been missing reading OneGirl lately. No one sems to update regularly over the summer. To me, that seems a little odd because it seems that people would have more time, but hey, whatever. :P I must ask, what was this massive gaping continuity error that was in the last chapter? I have no idea what you're talking about. But I obviously missed it, and that is going to annoy me to no end. Well, anyways, thanks for the update, can't wait till the next one, and happy writing. ~Jynxie |
![]() ![]() ![]() AW! I love the two anonymous gifts Rachel left Jessie! That was adorable; I wish someone would do that for me. :-) Yay for the update and yay for returning to updates. I can't wait to see what happens next. |