Reviews for OneGirl
myymonsterownsyerrs chapter 30 . 4/30/2010
Good chapter :D but gah I want more RachelxJessie action XD
A Typical Aquarius chapter 30 . 4/30/2010
Yay, finally things are progressing a little more!

This chapter was kinda short, but it was good!
Moonstalker chapter 29 . 4/27/2010
Yes! A chapter!

Couldn't help but grin at the image of Jessie dancing with Rachel, creates an adorable mental image.
A Typical Aquarius chapter 29 . 4/26/2010
Why should the next chapter please people?

Hmm, hmm, hmm?

I'm seriously curious now.

AnyMousse chapter 29 . 4/26/2010
"And I didn't mind the little flutter in my chest at the sight of her grin, either." *squeals* Rachel is so adorable!

I felt like this chapter was a little rushed, but good all the same. I feel bad for Jessie though; poor girl has never seen a body shot.

ANXIOUSLY awaiting Wednesday's chapter...
Amanandia chapter 28 . 4/26/2010
Squee. Squee. Absolute SQUEE. x3

I am seriously loving this one just as much as Singer. :D Yay. x3

...Although I'm seriously wondering where Jenny went. o_o And... um... Roxy, I think was her name. *ponders* ANYWAY. It ish awesome, and I just managed to read all twenty-seven chapters (plus prologue, xD) in, all total, about four hours. O_O

*waits impatiently for next chapter*

... Although, I swear, the sexual tension could be sliced through with a knife. A very sharp knife. xD ... I'm gonna go nuts if they don't kiss at SOME point soon, lol.

They work so much better as a couple. x3
Moonstalker chapter 28 . 4/25/2010
The only reason I didn't die when Singer ended was because I knew this one had already been launched. Adore them both and the really awkward but adorable (and slightly naughty) interactions. Like how you ease them back into being friends again, makes it alot more realistic.

Just to show you how much I love this series...

I read Singer in two days. TWO DAYS. And this one in half a day. My brain hurts from constantly staring at the computer screen, but that's fine! I even read it during school, heh~

Keep up the good work, can't wait for the next update!
vivifyy chapter 28 . 4/24/2010
i actually really like how you're taking the time to slowly build up to them going back to being friends and falling for each other again. xD most people jump right into it, like there's never awkwardness or complications or uncertainty, because they don't care to do it right. this is more realistic, and even if it's a total teaser, it's better than the alternative. it's still very cute.
Dara Nitz chapter 28 . 4/20/2010
Hey, that's not fair! That's a short chapter... and which such a cliffhanger (well, more like end). You can't do this!

You've sure got us eating out of the palms of your hands, feeding us teasing bits of Rachel/Jessie awkward-isms. Just give throw us the bacon already! 8D
the invisible princess chapter 28 . 4/20/2010
Wow that chapter was amazing!. *hopes rachel and jessica get together soon*. I love reading your story.
Mystic-Spiritus chapter 28 . 4/19/2010
Okay, so I JUST started reading Singer the other day (on chapter 60! Whoo!) and Jessica WAS told at some point that Rachel had a little brother by Rachel, except I think she said he was about 6 at the time.

"My brow furrowed in confusion. "Your... brother?" I didn't know she had a brother."

Lovin' the constant updates... OneGirl is one of the only stories I follow (out of hundreds) that updates regularly. FP is dead, lately.
AnyMousse chapter 28 . 4/19/2010
Holy crap! Man, that last scene was intense! The next chapter is going to be interesting...
myymonsterownsyerrs chapter 27 . 4/19/2010
I did Day of Silence and it landed me in detention. It was kinda hard to not talk all day. I love fluffy chapters :]
DarkShadow2012 chapter 27 . 4/17/2010
Great chapter. poor Rachel, you'll get a chance sooner or later hopefully.

Day of silence was the hardest and longest day of my life.

(mind you, i bearly talk as it is)

Anyways, keep it up.

Can't wait till the next chapter

Tears of a Dreamer chapter 27 . 4/17/2010
So close, yet so far, Rach. -pats sympathetically- Our school is participating in Day of Silence on the 21st! I will be silent al day. /cough It'll happen, I swear... Yup...
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