Reviews for OneGirl |
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![]() ![]() ![]() as always i love this story, i can't wait for more. thank you for helping me escape once again & im sorry that you didn't win the slash award for Singer, you definitely should have or I think so at least. keep up the great writing! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hope you enjoy the festival! Looking forward to the next chapter. Although I am wondering if Jessie is ever going to stop ignoring her feelings and admit that she still has a thing for Rachel. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cute chapter. Least we know Rachel's lyrics are just fueled by drunkeness. Until next time... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay, another update! I pounce on them every time i see you updated. I just live for the updates. I do have a little concern though: The updates don't seem to be getting anywhere. My friend and I were talking, and agreed that the updates are cute but not very progressive. I keep thinking "Oh, once Tah gets farther into the story and plot, more will happen..." but it never does. It seems like after Singer, this is a little... slow? I don't want to say dull, but it is borderling that. So... yeah... That's just a dedicated reader's insight. Good luck writing! ~ Jynxie |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hmm...Jessie sounds angsty in this chapter. At least towards the end; I think she's to concerned about what happened to Rachel in the past two years. I mean, yeah the new songs are morbid, but...isn't that kind of the point of metal? (I'm not a metalhead, so I wouldn't know). It'll be interesting to see what happens next. |
![]() ![]() ![]() aw their so cute! i hope u put them back together! and soon! they are perfect for each other... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw... I do feel sorry for Rachel D: xx |
![]() ![]() Now I like Derek. He's kind of cute around Jessica! Rachel cleaning the syrup on Jessica's face was priceless and cute and aw and oh and I'd love to see them together now! |
![]() ![]() ![]() *squeals* OH MY GOSH! I LOVE this chapter! It was so cute! And the ending, when Rachel wiped the syrup Jessie's cheek? That was great! Also, the line about "No one shoud be this cute without even trying," was great! Keep up the great work Tah; as always, you keep me coming back for more. Until Friday... |
![]() ![]() ![]() I thought Rachel was thisfreakingclose to jumping Jessie's bones. I loved it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So unbelieveably adorable. You had me smiling and squeaking throughout the entire chapter... Really well written, as always. Oh, I wonder how long Rachel will be able to control herself. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I dislike Lucas. However, I'm warming to Derek. :D xx |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love how the story is progressing, i hope we get at least a kiss lol but u know im secretly hoping for something more lol Great chapter, keep up the great writing! & once again thanks for helping me escape! |
![]() ![]() ![]() YAY! Lovely little Jessie/Rachel moments! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved the part about Lucas flirting with Rachel, I nearly fell out of my seat when Lucas called himself Rachel's boyfriend. |