Reviews for OneGirl
AnyMousse chapter 18 . 3/8/2010
Ek! Oh my gosh! So much going on in this chapter! It's going to drive me crazy! Lucas and Rachel; Jessie and Rachel; Rachel flirting with Lucas; Lucas CLAIMING he's her boyfriend; Rachel's protective instinct instinct over Jessie kicking in; Jessie hating Lucas and not knowing why (:-p Please. Could it BE anymore obvious?). To much! To much! Story overload!

WOW! I cannot WAIT for the next chapter! If/when Rachel and Jessie get back together, it's going to be epic.
The Moments of Happiness chapter 17 . 3/5/2010
Great chapter, I absolutely love Thomas, he's definitly my favorite.

And I love the song Keep It Gay from The Producers, I'm a rather huge fan of showtunes and that is one of my favorites :)
SCHATZI87 chapter 17 . 3/4/2010
hey as always i love this story as you know, if you could tell me where to vote i'd be happy too cuz i love this story. keep up the good work, and once again thank you for helping me escape :D
gaia-x-goddess chapter 17 . 3/4/2010
Aw, how I love Thomas. ALOT. xx
Dust Errant chapter 17 . 3/4/2010
If you have to rationalize why you don't like someone and only come out with a probably, you aren't doing it right lol. Thomas just couldn't get a break this chapter lol,poor guy. At any rate, good stuff, can't wait to read the next update.
AnyMousse chapter 17 . 3/3/2010
Wow Tah! There is so much going on in this chapter; there's Rachel rationalizing over whether or not she likes Lucas; there's the whole will she go back to being OneGirl or won't she and (as always) there's the concept of being friends with Jessie, which Rachel is obviously not happy about.

Good work! I wait anxiously for Friday's update...
gaia-x-goddess chapter 16 . 3/3/2010
Ah... I feel kina sorry for Rachel xP
Dust Errant chapter 16 . 3/3/2010
No worries, shit happens, at least you're still updating decently fast lol. Things have gotten a bit slow, I look forward to something happening to change the pace a bit.
AnyMousse chapter 16 . 3/2/2010
This is an interesting chapter; the Rachel/Lucas idea could be a number of things: either she does have a crush on him and is reluctant to admit it; she's smiling because she's truly enjoying Jessie's company (we've seen it before); or she's just teasing Jessie to get her reaction. But, then again, why would Rachel insist on kicking Jessie out of the house?

Good job Tah; as always, you keep me coming back for more. Until the next update...
pigwidgeon road chapter 15 . 3/1/2010
Lucas rocks! I like the new summary :)
Lav chapter 15 . 3/1/2010
I don't want to think about those *secret* piercings! _o_ it makes me curious why Rachel is not so fond of her past experiences.. Has someone hurt her? Besides Jessica, of course, but that is a sport for her..

I want Thomas! He's my second favorite!
gaia-x-goddess chapter 15 . 2/27/2010
For some reason, I didn't put this on alert. But I found it again. *rolls eyes* I'm an idiot.

So, anyway, omg, its great xP DEFINITELY going on alert.
DefendMyGirlsHonor chapter 15 . 2/26/2010
wow! this story is amazing!

Your a great writer! keep up the good work!
AnyMousse chapter 15 . 2/26/2010
Lucas...I'm trying to remember here; was he in Singer? Because I'm either forgetting he was in Singer, or he's a new character. Either way, there seems to be more of a story here between these two. Or just Rachel's usual thing of getting-drunk-and-then-getting-laid thing. Good chapter.
A Typical Aquarius chapter 14 . 2/23/2010
This is my favorite chapter so far. Just thought I would let ya know. :)
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