Reviews for OneGirl |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Ek! Oh my gosh! So much going on in this chapter! It's going to drive me crazy! Lucas and Rachel; Jessie and Rachel; Rachel flirting with Lucas; Lucas CLAIMING he's her boyfriend; Rachel's protective instinct instinct over Jessie kicking in; Jessie hating Lucas and not knowing why (:-p Please. Could it BE anymore obvious?). To much! To much! Story overload! WOW! I cannot WAIT for the next chapter! If/when Rachel and Jessie get back together, it's going to be epic. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter, I absolutely love Thomas, he's definitly my favorite. And I love the song Keep It Gay from The Producers, I'm a rather huge fan of showtunes and that is one of my favorites :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() hey as always i love this story as you know, if you could tell me where to vote i'd be happy too cuz i love this story. keep up the good work, and once again thank you for helping me escape :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw, how I love Thomas. ALOT. xx |
![]() ![]() ![]() If you have to rationalize why you don't like someone and only come out with a probably, you aren't doing it right lol. Thomas just couldn't get a break this chapter lol,poor guy. At any rate, good stuff, can't wait to read the next update. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow Tah! There is so much going on in this chapter; there's Rachel rationalizing over whether or not she likes Lucas; there's the whole will she go back to being OneGirl or won't she and (as always) there's the concept of being friends with Jessie, which Rachel is obviously not happy about. Good work! I wait anxiously for Friday's update... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah... I feel kina sorry for Rachel xP |
![]() ![]() ![]() No worries, shit happens, at least you're still updating decently fast lol. Things have gotten a bit slow, I look forward to something happening to change the pace a bit. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is an interesting chapter; the Rachel/Lucas idea could be a number of things: either she does have a crush on him and is reluctant to admit it; she's smiling because she's truly enjoying Jessie's company (we've seen it before); or she's just teasing Jessie to get her reaction. But, then again, why would Rachel insist on kicking Jessie out of the house? Good job Tah; as always, you keep me coming back for more. Until the next update... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lucas rocks! I like the new summary :) |
![]() ![]() I don't want to think about those *secret* piercings! _o_ it makes me curious why Rachel is not so fond of her past experiences.. Has someone hurt her? Besides Jessica, of course, but that is a sport for her.. I want Thomas! He's my second favorite! |
![]() ![]() ![]() For some reason, I didn't put this on alert. But I found it again. *rolls eyes* I'm an idiot. So, anyway, omg, its great xP DEFINITELY going on alert. |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow! this story is amazing! Your a great writer! keep up the good work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lucas...I'm trying to remember here; was he in Singer? Because I'm either forgetting he was in Singer, or he's a new character. Either way, there seems to be more of a story here between these two. Or just Rachel's usual thing of getting-drunk-and-then-getting-laid thing. Good chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is my favorite chapter so far. Just thought I would let ya know. :) |