Reviews for OneGirl
Von Uriken chapter 11 . 2/14/2010
Very nicely handled. I'm definitely liking the length and progression of this so far, though I am rather curious about the boyfriend and how he'll be handled. I was under the impression that Jessie didn't quite get the same... Tingle, I guess... From boys as she did from Rachel.
dynamite chapter 11 . 2/14/2010
Sakura0890 chapter 11 . 2/13/2010
Poor Derek, all by himself now. Or is he? Wonder how alcohol effects him. Keep up the great work!
Dust Errant chapter 11 . 2/13/2010
Hm, I wonder what happened to Jessie's BF lol? Nice chapter regardless.
SCHATZI87 chapter 11 . 2/12/2010
I hope ur feeling better. I absolutely LOVE this story to pieces, i can't wait to see what happens. I hope they are on track to something good if you know what i mean lol ;D Thank you for helping me escape to another place whenever i read your stories. I can't wait for more... Thank you
AnyMousse chapter 11 . 2/12/2010
I love the last two paragraphs here; Rachel was UBER adorbale in them. Thanks for the update!
Von Uriken chapter 10 . 2/10/2010
I read through all of Singer and One Girl just recently, and I love them both so far. You manage to steer yourself far enough outside of the cliches to stay fresh and enjoyable without any of the moments that make me want to slap my forehead. I can't wait to see you update again.
Sakura0890 chapter 10 . 2/9/2010
I can't believe I hadn't added this story to my Story Alerts. I could have sworn I had once I realized there were two chapters up. Anyways, I can't wait to read the next chapter. And just out of curiosity, which team were you cheering for the Super Bowl, Saints or Colts?
Your Heroin chapter 10 . 2/7/2010
Happy birthday.

*twitter stalker*
The Moments of Happiness chapter 10 . 2/7/2010
So.. uhm.. I just realized I've read all of 'Singer' and 'Onegirl' and have never once reviewed. Whoopsie.

Hmm where to start.. Well I absolutely love Rachel and Jessie's relationship, not a big fan of Roxene, and Thomas would probably have to be my favorite character, love the way Rachel calls him 'sparkles.' XD

I was kinda depressed when they broke up in 'Singer' and am glad they're at least trying to be friends in 'Onegirl.' Also found the fact that Jessie's roommate is a huge onegirl fan pretty hilarious.

As another side comment, I love your writing style, everything very descriptive and making it very easy for me to envision exactly what is going on in the story. Keep it up.

By the way I am terribly sorry for my crappy descriptions, its hard to sum up everything I liked about two stories in one little review, especially when the stories are so amazing.

And now that I'm pretty sure this is the longest review ever, I promise to become a more dedicated reviewer from now on. Please update soon! :)
AnyMousse chapter 10 . 2/6/2010
Aww, come on Jessie! Just give in already! Nice job Tah; why do I get the feeling that Rachel meeting Jessie's boyfriend is going to be interesting? And that going to the club is going to be interesting?

By the way, I think Rachel was lying; I don't think she was sick.

Until the next update.
SCHATZI87 chapter 10 . 2/6/2010
i cant get over this story i love it, i can't wait to see if anything happens to them, like a kiss or a love scene that would be HOT lol i know ima dork. thank u for helping me escape once again can't wait for the coming chps
tehehe chapter 10 . 2/5/2010
nice. it's your birthday this weekend? happy birthday!
Hali2010 chapter 9 . 2/4/2010
great story so far, i absolutely fell in love with singer and just wanted to say keep up the good work XD!

but you know what i don't understand is why in the world we've got a freakin' gopher tellin' us when springs gonna come... I mean don't you think the U.S. could come up with a little more sophisticated way to tell if spring's comin' early? and for as long as i can remember phil has never ONCE not seen his shadow...explain idk it's late i need sleep. bye!
AnyMousse chapter 9 . 2/3/2010
Aw; I like this chapter! It was cute and funny. And the awkwardness between them is fading. Yay!
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