Reviews for OneGirl |
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![]() ![]() ![]() A very good start to the sequel. I like how you conveyed emotions. Poor Rachel. Now I shall read the rest. ;D |
![]() ![]() ![]() ok you have to promise me that they will get back together and jess will get rid of her bf because they belong together! please! i'll beg if you need me to! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Buddy awesome. That is all :P |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay for Monday updates! I've been waiting to read the next chapter since I got up this morning. Made going to work more bearable :-) Anyway, good chapter, the tension between Jessie and Rachel is grat and I love having Buddy in this chapter :-) Until Wednesday... |
![]() ![]() ![]() *whistles* We have a long way to go, don't we? _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'd say you should be all three. Depending on her success, I'd certainly lead more towards worried though :P |
![]() ![]() At this point, Im just charmed by Rachel's storming yet sweet character. When I imagine her playing the piano -my favorite instrument; it just comes from disturbing, sexy heavenly hell-,I go nuts. I want more of the strong musician that Rachel is! Please, put Jessica into some kind of hypnosis so she can go right away to Rachel -for a long, romantic lesson of piano-... I miss OneGirl in action. Can't wait to see more of Thomas too. He's cutie and I want to eat him (too). But no Rox please.. Ill be supporting you and Rachel -of course-, your writing is just shuper-genial :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Woot! Sequel is here :D Awesome as always. |
![]() ![]() Yay! I can't wait for Monday! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Something makes me think Jessie is trying not to fall for Rachel. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow Tah; great use of sexual tension in this chapter; I could feel how tense and anxious Jessie was. Very good; anxiously awaiting the next chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome chapter! I just sit here in my chair and grin like a maniac every time I read a new chapter of yours. :) You rock! |
![]() ![]() ![]() lemme guess? You were talking about me in that author's note. If you are, you should be very amused and pleased. Manybe worried later, but not right now! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I lovee updates. "Piss off, Sparkles" is my absolute favorite quote ever! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome! I love it. |