|Reviews for Gone, But Not Forgotten|
| RoseLynn chapter 1 . 9/21/2010
First I would like to say that I am very sorry for your loss. Writing this story is such a beautiful and deeply personal tribute to your friend.
I don't believe the changes in narration were confusing at all. In fact I very much enjoyed it and thought it helped progress the story quite smoothly. The whole story has very small grammar & spelling errors like the following: "I watched some TV, ate some afternoon tea, contemplated study and decided against it." change 'ate' to 'drank' and 'study' to 'studying'.
Overall, very well written and strong focus. I loved it and want to thank you for allowing me to read such a personal piece.