Reviews for Steps
Juriya chapter 23 . 7/20/2021
I've already reviewed this and favourited the story, but I just re-read it again for fun. Your story just felt so real and down to Earth, honestly. I bet if you polished this and tried publishing it, you would succeed. I'd love to own this book for my bookshelf too haha
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Juriya chapter 23 . 2/3/2019
Too lazy to log in (I reviewed previously as sunnyreader). Just thought I'd stop by and tell you that I'm shocked this doesn't have 1000 reviews because this is definitely right up there with the other 1000 reviewed stories. And honestly, it kinda irks me that there's some pretty cliche garbage stories that somehow have a 1000 reviews yet your's doesn't yet. More people need to find this story; post a lame update or something so people see this story bumped into their view. You'd be doing the Fictionpress community a favour.
ThatGirl chapter 23 . 2/12/2018
This was a really interesting story. I like that Chris and Kris will eventually end up together. Kris's relationship with Peter honestly makes me..ick. it just doesn't seem to connect for me even though they had quite a number of moments. Maybe its because he wants to rush into marriage and make huge decisions for just a turn off for me. Every scene they had together made me cringe and annoy the hell outta me. I've always wanted her to be with chris.
Guest chapter 23 . 9/30/2017
What a captivating story! I can't wait to see what come next between Ch- Chris, K- Kris and all the characters I've come to know and love. Thank you.
JJ chapter 23 . 8/4/2017
Hi I just wanted to tell you I LOVED this story and hope to see you write a sequel someday.
Blue Rose Ink chapter 15 . 1/7/2017
Dude, why you make me cry real tears. I was not prepared.
MJC chapter 17 . 10/18/2016
Okay so as I said before if Peter cheats I'll throw my phone so I'm glad he didn't sleep with one of the bridesmaids at the wedding since that's what most writers would have done. I like how he's still trying to be with her. I know this story will end up as ChrisXKris but I still ship KrisXPeter. I don't know if my opinion will change but that's for the rest of the story to decide.
I really like the story so far. You know apart from their parents dying. That was really sad and I felt really bad even though their only book character because I've gotta so attached to the characters now.
I hope Kris' hands get better and things start to look better.
Guest chapter 11 . 10/18/2016
I swear to god if Peter cheats I'll throw my phone at the door...
sunnyreader chapter 23 . 10/4/2016
Best thing I've read in a LONG time. Favouriting this story as soon as I get a chance to log in onto my account. Seriously? SUCH an amazing story. Can't believe I've never found it before... where have I been?
Rozyl chapter 23 . 5/12/2016
I really love the way you wrote the ending. It could have been intense, but then your way of writing was better coz it is much sweeter and light:) Btw, im reading this in 2016 :)
herondalechick123 chapter 23 . 5/11/2016
I read this all within a day and I absolutely loved it. It definitely tugged at some heartstrings and made me remember my first crush and boyfriend, though I wish I had succeeded with my first crush as Kris did. But oh my gosh, Chris and Kris, they both deserve a sequel
SomethingSimsy chapter 23 . 1/26/2016
YESSSSS xD I was so psyched when Chris and Kris finally kissed, haha! Wonderful story!
sonder this chapter 23 . 12/7/2015
A sequel would be an interesting idea but not necessary I think. As much as I'd like to see how Kris would deal with this facet to her relationship in relation to her current relationship with Peter, I think you hashed into their conflicts pretty well. What, with both K/Chris's opposing personalities - the one who lets it all out VS the one who keeps it all in. There were a couple things that I think could have been tied up better, namely the point at which Kris started to see Chris in [that] kind of light. We saw her epiphany of when she realized what he meant by his 'cryptic' words but when she actually returned his feelings, it left me wondering, 'Huh... so when did she consider him even closely as a possible romantic interest?' Because the whole time up to these last two chapters, she was still wavering between that line of is he a friend or is he not? And then bam, this happens. Yes, they did grow closer as people who have gone through a near-death experience together do but there is a difference between that and actual romantic feelings.

Since there seems to be an unlikely chance that there will be a sequel, I think the last loose end in this story would have been Kris and Peter's reaction to this recent development. I understand why you didn't add it because that would have probably taken more than a chapter - not to mention, ruin the good vibes of the ending here but since the majority of the story was dedicated to her and Peter's relationship, there is an unavoidable aftertaste underlying the happiness. I am not actually a PeterKris shipper but I did like how you did not make him out to be the villain because that is an easy out for most writers who tackle the theme of love triangles. He actually sounds like the "perfect" boyfriend, really. Truthfully though, I was almost tempted at times to skip their scenes due to how fluffy they were, heh, but then I'm glad I didn't because I was quite pleased to see that you tackled the common issues in relationships - how when two people have different goals for their life together (at least at that moment) and conflicting interests (and their reactions to said conflict) Great job on that.

Anyways, I do not know if you write on this site anymore but what I do hope is that you are continuing to write in general because this story clearly demonstrates your writing skills - I can tell you are a pretty perceptive individual from how you wrote Kris' POV and I think story aside, this can serve as a lesson for people who are struggling with similar issues.
GnCdwll chapter 23 . 12/1/2014
OMG. You just made me hate you for leaving it like that. But I love it all the same! I've always known from the start that they're gonna be together in the end, but as the story goes on my faith was fading huhu. But I'm really glad for that intimate scene in the end. I was genuinely surprised. Even if it was just a teeny tiny bit one. I hope for a sequel pleaasee!
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