Reviews for Mr Imperfect
LcT514 chapter 1 . 8/9/2012
This. Was. ADORABLE ! 'Nough said :D.
DorkExpress chapter 1 . 9/6/2011
How adorable... I think it was a perfect ending.

builtonbones chapter 1 . 3/31/2010
AWE. That was really really really adorable and sweet. But it's sue me not sew haha sorry I had to correct that. It's pretty cliche but it's really sweet. Like marvelously sweet. And that fact that Alex loves her is predictable but mostly for the reason that it is a still I really like this(:
mindlessthinking chapter 1 . 3/7/2010
that was insanley cute i loved it
whitecrayons chapter 1 . 1/5/2010
hey nice story! :D

(but your 'sew' in your ending not should be 'sue'. and 'it'd' should be 'it's'. and eh.. there were some spelling mistakes and this -

"I-I-I I need to ask you something?" I clenched my fists like a little girl having a tantrum -

sounds a little weird. the tantrum thing doesn't really make sense.

she's nervous, no?

so yeah.

other than that it's great! :D

- !
Beautiful Destination chapter 1 . 1/2/2010
It does need some editing, but overall, it was a really cute story! :)
SarcasmIsPoetry chapter 1 . 1/2/2010
Wah. I love it. But what happened to Dave?
je ne veux pas travailler chapter 1 . 1/2/2010
it needs some editing because there are a lot of speeling and grammatical errors, but this was reealy enojyable to should write more :)
outsidersgirl chapter 1 . 1/2/2010
a good one
bright city lights chapter 1 . 1/1/2010
cue the chorus of 'awhs!'. ohmigawd, i loved it so much. :) it was purfect. although, it does need editing-just a few grammar mistakes is all. overall, amazazing. :)

A Moment In The Rain chapter 1 . 1/1/2010
Loved it! that was so cute!