This. Was. ADORABLE ! 'Nough said :D.

How adorable... I think it was a perfect ending.

XOXO

AWE. That was really really really adorable and sweet. But it's sue me not sew haha sorry I had to correct that. It's pretty cliche but it's really sweet. Like marvelously sweet. And that fact that Alex loves her is predictable but mostly for the reason that it is a still I really like this(:

that was insanley cute i loved it

hey nice story! :D

(but your 'sew' in your ending not should be 'sue'. and 'it'd' should be 'it's'. and eh.. there were some spelling mistakes and this -

"I-I-I I need to ask you something?" I clenched my fists like a little girl having a tantrum -

sounds a little weird. the tantrum thing doesn't really make sense.

she's nervous, no?

so yeah.

other than that it's great! :D

- !

It does need some editing, but overall, it was a really cute story! :)

Wah. I love it. But what happened to Dave?

it needs some editing because there are a lot of speeling and grammatical errors, but this was reealy enojyable to read..you should write more :)

a good one

cue the chorus of 'awhs!'. ohmigawd, i loved it so much. :) it was purfect. although, it does need editing-just a few grammar mistakes is all. overall, amazazing. :)

~wings

Loved it! that was so cute!