|Reviews for Drowning|
| Zoeybird101 chapter 1 . 4/3/2010
wow this is um and um ya and yes
| Isca chapter 1 . 1/5/2010
"The night is closing in." I love the tone of this opening line - it's so wonderfully angsty and captivating.
"The dark ocean of regret that sleeps inside of me." Nice phrasing. I particularly like "sleeps inside of me " - that's a unique image :).
| Ms. Audrey G chapter 1 . 1/1/2010
Wow. I sometimes feel that way.
| Princess-anna57 chapter 1 . 1/1/2010
Aw, we all feel like this at some point. Always be positive. Write on please :)
| gone4good chapter 1 . 1/1/2010
Never regret anything that made you smile. I forget who said this, but it is one of my favs.
I like your poem. It has beauty. I am sure you do, too.