Reviews for Drowning |
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![]() ![]() ![]() wow this is um and um ya and yes |
![]() ![]() ![]() "The night is closing in." I love the tone of this opening line - it's so wonderfully angsty and captivating. "The dark ocean of regret that sleeps inside of me." Nice phrasing. I particularly like "sleeps inside of me " - that's a unique image :). |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. I sometimes feel that way. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw, we all feel like this at some point. Always be positive. Write on please :) ~Anna~ _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Never regret anything that made you smile. I forget who said this, but it is one of my favs. I like your poem. It has beauty. I am sure you do, too. |