Reviews for One More Chance |
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![]() ![]() Ugh please write more soon! I'm loving this story so much so far. |
![]() ![]() ![]() love it! btw, when she was first at the poliece station,it fisst said she was holding the dog, then it said the dog was still att the store. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Can't wait for more. A little continuity error: It says that she was holding Colby in the police station but later in the paragraph it says that he is still at the store. |
![]() ![]() ![]() lovelovelove it! cant wait for more! pretty please update soon! happy late new years hope your holiday went well -ifly*hugs* |
![]() ![]() The Summary was too much for me. It sounded like a movie trailer and this movie trailer basicaily told the whole movie, you told me the whole story... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Keep up the good work :) |