Nicely written. Good characterization.

awesome...she sounds cool.

a raven huh? colies

is there gonna be more?

It sounds ok enough so far. Interesting too. Can't wait to see how it turns out:)

Honestly, I don't like it very much. You seem to focus too much on one thing but not enough on other things. It doesn't flow very well. And the whole werewolf thing sounds like something from another book.