Reviews for The Bones of the Ancestors
fleur de l'est chapter 1 . 1/3/2010
I loved the regular structure & repetitions of words, I admire people whose poems' rigid forms do not hinder the meanings, and you are obviously one of them!

The rhythm readily flowing, and you make the word choice seem so natural; this is really well written.

A very good tragedy sympathising with the defeated.

(1st verse 2nd line - 'most sacred of man' do you mean 'men'?)