Reviews for Perfection Alert |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH! IT'S BEEN ON HIATUS FOR SO LONG! Pleaz update? Bye! |
![]() ![]() ![]() u have to write more and fast! I love your story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() on hiatus?! aww man :( i hope you'll continue soon! this is a really awesome story so *cross fingers!* :)))) |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a great book! Finish it please... I 3 Jared :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() hahaha i lovee this story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Heehee this is hilarious :) Pretty please update soon! Btw I find this story a whole lot easier to understand then American ones cos I'm Australian too :) haha |
![]() ![]() ![]() I see it's been a year since an update. Any interest on updating? -hint hint- |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is hilarious and really well written. I love Alexa as a character. Hayden, Jarred, Taylor and Clarisse are all pretty awesome too. In fact... okay... I love all you characters. It's also awesome to read a story based in Aussie. I'm from NZ, so I get all your references pretty much (a bit rusty on the license thing though. It's different for us). But it makes more sense for me than the American way. I know what you mean about that research, huh. It can be a downer. Anyway, this is really cool. Alexa has got spunk, which I really like. Jarred knows exactly what effect he has on girls and milks it. I love that. They work together so well. Anyway, awesome story! It's really entertaining and hilarious. Update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() ha-ha i love the bet and how he changed his mind, but there is no way in a million years i would ever wear something like that, i think i would have crawled out a window to get away first :D but the story is uber cute! keep it up! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i like this story is there gonna be more? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Typos: fmatch t-shit outmanoeuvred Not a big deal at all and hard to notice, but I just thought I'd point them out if you wanted to edit or something. And ahh, perfection alert was introduced! Jarred and his arrogance is quite funny. Please update soon! (: (By the way, thank you the congrats!) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah, this was funny and sweet and just... really great. I'm liking the characters, the dialogue, and the voices. It's all very well done. (: (Creative chapter titles for the win!) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Haha, I really like what I've read so far. I hope you update soon. It's great. |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is great so far! update pleasae! |
![]() ![]() ![]() . So how did she give into the bet? |