|Reviews for Motion|
| nickyO chapter 1 . 1/3/2010
I like this alot. Love the appreciation of the everyday in the beginning of the work and how you move on with the theme into people and their feelings.
| IndifferentIgnorance chapter 1 . 1/3/2010
Clever! The only one you didn't do was motion sickness :)
| sealednectar chapter 1 . 1/2/2010
Interesting. I like the feeling of motion that you created in these haikus. My favourite one is the last one; I like the way you used enjambment to allow a feeling of motion in the words. :)