Reviews for Perspective
steffxnie chapter 1 . 1/22/2010
Good use of emotive language. A well written heartfelt piece. There's something very deep here, and it's really well expressed. I love the last lines. Great job. Keep it up.
awanida chapter 1 . 1/3/2010
i like it i dont think you should edit it's pretty good in my opinion leave it as is
socks-lost chapter 1 . 1/3/2010
I know what you're saying about the fictionpress thing.

"I should've realized that I wasn't crying for you,

but for who you had been, a protector, a friend"

Those were my two favorite lines. I really the poem. The emotion here is real. I really like it, keep it up!