Reviews for His Captive
karo chapter 33 . 6/24/2012
Please, PLEASE update! I so want to read the rest of the story, so to bide the time I keep re-reading what you have so far. It's really good keep it up!
dipintheriverstyx chapter 33 . 6/21/2012
I miss this story so much. Where have you gone? This is my favourite series on FP.

Please come back. I MUST KNOW WHAT HAPPENS!

I need my Faolan time.
B chapter 33 . 6/4/2012
I found this very interesting! I am not okay that she had sex before marriage, but I will overlook that. Wow, those students sound like the little kids at my church. Whenever the little ones are asked a question that they dont know, they automatically say, "Jesus!"
Sandy chapter 33 . 5/7/2012
Pleas update! Please!
twishy04 chapter 33 . 3/25/2012
Finish the story pppllleeaaasssee! I'm going cray-cray for this to be finished. Just wanted to let you know that I love all of your stories. pls. finish 3
Kaye chapter 33 . 3/24/2012
Love love this story! Can't wait to find out what happens next! :)
OhMyPeanut chapter 1 . 3/18/2012
Wow, I just finished reading His Queen, and then i started this one today! I really can't to see how the story ends. Good Job
Sammi chapter 33 . 2/25/2012
Please continue writing this! I have spent two days reading "his queen" and now "his captive", I need MORE! What happens next? Keep up the good work! I LOVE this series:D
Starcrazed chapter 33 . 2/8/2012
Loved it~! Amazing can't wait to see what happens next. I love sabre he's one of my favorite Characters. So is Lars and Faolan and Vin. I don't really like the ex-fiance. he seems kinda whiney and territorial. I really love how you're story is turning out~!
FamishedNight chapter 33 . 2/6/2012
Awesome chapter! Love it! Update soon!
surprise butt secks chapter 33 . 2/2/2012
I'm not even lying when I say it took me one day to read all thirty three chapters, that's how great your story is. I'm a little bit in love with Vin and Faolan's bond together, too. He's just so cute around her despite the fact he's kind of socially retarded around everyone else. Your concept (AND how you've continued your sequel) of the story is fantastic, and original, which I really appreciated, hah. It does help that I'm a sucker for 'mates'. The whole business with mates and 'other halves' just sends me tingling. (Which, reading over again, I'll admit sounds a small bit either obsessed or perverted. Which I am neither. Mehbe -perv wink-) The only, only, only thing that I have a problem with is that you don't use page breaks or anything of the sort when you change scenes. It's not a huge problem, and is easily fixable, it's just confusing with the abrupt change. Otherwise though, this was such a pleasant read, and I hope you update soon, because I am KEEN! :)
The Crabby Pig chapter 33 . 1/26/2012
Your story is most definitely not boring. If it had been boring I highly doubt I would've stayed up until 5 in the morning 'cause I was "only going to read one more chapter" Oops. The pace is fantastic and I'm in love with Faolan and Vinaya's relationship it's so believable, unlike some of the overly dramatic relationships other authors can conjure up. It's real, believable and very down to earth which is a highly refreshing change. So, to save from extra rambling your story is awesome, your characters are epic, and I cannot wait to see what will happen next!
lovelessinfatuation chapter 1 . 1/21/2012
Alright, I can honestly say that I really admire your writing. I can't imagine being able to write this kind of story. I never really find good adventure love stories so I was extremely excited when I read the first book and I instantly fell in love with the second. By the way, you didn't make up Amarilla it means yellow as an adjective for a feminine noun in Spanish. The only thing I hope to see in future chapters is a bit more detail in those climatic parts so that it doesn't go by so fast. I really appreciate the fact that your fighting scenes are realistic and not overly fantastic like many other stories I have found.
S.Lockheart chapter 33 . 1/20/2012
It took me about 3days to read all 33 chapters n the story is amazing so far :D I totally LOVE and have a soft spot for Sabre! :) I'v also read your book 'Burning Brightly' and cannot wait for it to be finished, sorry I didn't review it though as I didn't know how at the time :) keep up the awesome writing and I look forward to your updates! :)
pbgurl chapter 33 . 1/12/2012
I don't think this story is boring. I think becuase its nearing finals for some people, its taking as lot more time for people to review back, like me lol. I'm sorry it took me so long. But definitely this story is not boring, I actually think this is your best one. Also my favorite story of yours.

Yay! I always love when Vin gets to fight, she rocks at fighting! I'm hoping we get to know a little more about her powers and that she could use it in the war becuase than she could stop the war before it has even begun if she can kill all the men.

-Liz :D
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