Reviews for I Have Friends In High Places!
ranDUMM chapter 1 . 1/5/2010
Hey,

Hahahaha! That was a pretty funny one shot! :D I love the way you wrote it :) There are a few grammar mistakes and such throughout the piece. For example:

“Hard work”

There should be something before the quotation marks like a comma or a fullstop, etc. Also:

I don’t care if you can speak English like the rest of us, that fact that you’re going to assault me shows that you people are nothing but bunch of thugs and cockroaches, this is what is wrong with this country!

That is too long of a run-on sentence, it's hard for the reader to keep up. A full stop or an exclamation mark here or there would be easier for us to read :) Great work with the one shot! Really amusing :)

ranDUMM