Reviews for The Nothing That You Mean |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Wow... beautiful. You just described... wow, I couldn't find words to express what I felt right now but you found them very well. "Baby, I never expected you to love me, and yet it holds such a bitter,sickening, horrible, utter disaster." - exactly, exactly how I feel. "The adoration of a hopeful (stupid) dreamer." -yes, that exactly I was (am)... Now I have tears in my eyes again... Nicely, heart-breaking done. Sincerly, Nyrihaz (and her broken heart) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Truly beautiful. I think your writing really connects, flows from each verse to create meaning. I also like how you staggered the stanzas; that's a good technique for the reader to feel what the writer does. Keep writing. |