Reviews for Flames On Thin Ice
Lee Daniel chapter 1 . 1/22/2010
I love the metaphor of the ice. It expresses vulnerability quite nicely. The passion is well described here also.
sealednectar chapter 1 . 1/6/2010
Oh, I don't know why but that 'walking on thin ice' made me think that they weren't meant to be together for some reason, am not sure. However, I love the description in this poem, very vivid. Only point I can raise is that are you sure you didn't mean 'shuddering' instead of 'shuttering'?