Reviews for I Thought I Saw Something |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Uh-oh... Seems that Vince is smarter than he seems. He clocked on to Marianne's 'vacation' sooner than I thought! I'm guessing there will be trouble very soon - much sooner than I thought! I was wondering was Jude's and Vince's marriage a business arrangement? I think it was but then they had a baby so... maybe he needed an heir? I say this because Jude seems like a good judge of character so would she not have been able to suss out Vince's personality and behaviour before? Anyway, thanks for the update. Looking forward to more - soon ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() *le gasp!* Vince makes me so angry I wanna stab him in the eye with toothpicks. This is a very happy making update! Can't wait for more! Hope you update soon! Have a great week! -Ifly*hugs* |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOVE IT! More soon please! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow what was that about him working for Vince. I hope he catches her in time to explain everything to her. Will she want to go back to her old life once they find? I don't know I mean she's really starting to life she has now. I don't know but it's getting good. D |
![]() ![]() ![]() You updated :) Okay. It's official. I despise Arabella. What is she doing? I know she wants Kyle back and all but does she have an ulterior motive? I liked how you showed the growing affections between Kyle and Jude - not obvious but their actions speak louder than words, especially now. To be honest, I'm not too sure as to why she immediately jumped to the conclusion that Kyle is a spy. I understand that she is super paranoid now but is it because Kyle keeps showcasing behaviour that show her he wants her to stay? I don't know if it's just me but Kyle seemed to be perfectly normal when he was asking her if she was okay so I don't know where she got that from. Oh well, I know she's paranoid and scared so that's her excuse I guess. I liked how you give an insight into other characters. Marianne and Allister weren't that involved in the other story so it's nice to see them here. I can sense trouble brewing - Vince has been quiet for too long... I hope you update soon :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOVELOVELOVE IT! CONGRATS ON THE ENGAEMENT! BEST WISHES! HAVE A GREAT HONEYMOON! sorry for all the caps -ifly*hugs* |
![]() ![]() ![]() Congratulations - and great stories, by the way. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Great story! Can't wait for more updates! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Congrats! Have a great wedding! I love it btw! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hehe still loving the story! xx Ali |
![]() ![]() ![]() What an interesting chapter. With the long lost lover and then the Barlett's figuring out who she is! There is definitely going to be some interesting things to come.) |
![]() ![]() ![]() le gasp! omfg! its amazing! i lovelovelove it! *jumps up and down in seat* cant wait for more! have a great weekend! -ifly*hugs* |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay! People to help her! Keep updating. I'm excited to see how it all turns out :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() nora and jack are back ) hope to see another update soon! the story is about to pick up? |