Reviews for I Thought I Saw Something |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Yeah Jack Bartlett! Now maybe that guy won't be so suspicious of her after that cry. I like how this story seems to be going. I also liked that fast updates! P Can't wait to read more about it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() loveing the chapter and the fast updates |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting... I hope if he does find out about her that he helps her and doesn't send her away... Can't wait for more! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, I'm so looking forward to seeing how this story unfolds! Will it be a long one or just a couple of chapters? |
![]() ![]() ![]() ok. so. she's been accepted, but what's Kyle going to do if and when he finds out? and i changed my mind .~ i like the name judith xx unLuKy |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love how you manged to mix your other story into here! its amazing and i love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Its an awesome story! But on one part i was confused. right before he slips it says "He had just put ice on the sidewalk an hour ago" I think you meant salt... but other than that its all good! I love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i LIKE it! so far everything sounds pretty awesome! cant wait for more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's coming together well. I think though she should have had more backbone than she's shown especially when she's more than able to pay for anything to take care of herself and her baby instead of running. But then again one never knows what they are capable of doing or having to do until they get in this situation. |
![]() ![]() ![]() oohh! chapter 2. so they've met. at first i didnt like Kyle, but i think i warmed up to him by the end. anyway, something negative? well... no offence, but the name Judith doesnt really suit a 21st century girl from high society. (if that's where she's from, because i interpretted her that way.) try leila/layla or angie? just a suggestion *shrugs* xx unLuKy |
![]() ![]() ![]() ooh... good start although a bit short. sorta has a bit of mystery around it. lol. but that just might be me xx unLuKy |
![]() ![]() ![]() lovers it! cant wait for more! hope you update soon! -ifly*hugs* |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like the direction this story is headed. I'm looking forward to the future chapters that you will post. Please update soon. |