Reviews for windblown
in the city of neon and chrome chapter 1 . 1/19/2011
i like the use of "windblown" as an adj.

"her own blood" is creepy, but a good creepy. it makes you think, why HER blood?

"who's to say we should?" - nice ending. draws the reader in more. :)
cab fed hig chapter 1 . 1/17/2011
"who's to say we should?" a particularly monumental idea in my opinion; though obviously endlessly sad to dwell on

i like how you seem to purposefully pick hard topics to discuss and revel in the opportunity to dissect it and imagine its topical meaning. i really love it.
fisheye lens chapter 1 . 5/15/2010
I love how it's acknowledged staying behind is a cliche - it's crazy and insane, and maybe only makes sense to me, but I feel as if the emotion's conveyed even more - even if it's only one line. It's strange - but the poem amazes me.
4tehlessthan3of0scoreintennis chapter 1 . 1/10/2010
wow, that was really good. keep it up. ]
GirlWithTheBrokenSmile chapter 1 . 1/7/2010
Ahh there's a deeper meaning to this than I can grasp. I love this style, and you make good use of it. Your word choice is impeccable and I love the lines:

"she takes the hand of a stranger,

clinging helplessly to the hope she lost

long ago.

alone is cliche, so she must be too"

Beautifully done. Write on!
Little girl Big world chapter 1 . 1/6/2010
Love some of these lines, "off balanced and graceful,

she twirls." & "nobody cares

about the girl, flitting in and out of our world."

Nicely written. Great work :D
letyoursoultakeflight chapter 1 . 1/5/2010
off balanced and graceful,

she twirls.

- love that bit ]

Well, all of it really. I like how you label her cliche and have the end bit asking a question. I really quite like this poem a lot! ] Yay!
Candyred829 chapter 1 . 1/4/2010
Good. Keep writing