|Reviews for Serendipitous Disaster|
| letyoursoultakeflight chapter 1 . 1/22/2010
Loveit, love it, love it!
| Punslinger chapter 1 . 1/9/2010
It made me smile, too, at the logic of love. Everything flows logically from the premise that love is lunacy. Keep up the good work.
| tonight we bloom chapter 1 . 1/9/2010
I love this!
| the prophet apathetic chapter 1 . 1/8/2010
I really like this.
I think it's wonderful that you broke up the structure of those two lines with periods. In a less than literal sense, it represents your logical side, your mind, the clinical and structured piece-by-piece thoughts. It's like saying "these words should go together and they do. kindof." while the words your heart is speaking just flow...
Just great ) love it. Love the metaphors, love the conflict and the tormented recognition mingled with giddiness.
| Vanity Means Nothingness chapter 1 . 1/7/2010
This is really good. I love the broken sentence bits, and the overall feeling of it. And the last line being a verse of its own.