Reviews for my body is gridlock
PeNnOtE chapter 1 . 1/27/2010
I really like your style of writing, the punctuation and the formatting. It's very unique and it's like looking at a piece of art. Made to be read. Fantastic job.
Your-Magpie chapter 1 . 1/4/2010

i dont know if you did this perposefully, but i interpreted it like this: but are the seperate stanzaz different cars?

all gridlocked, and then the trailing letters on the right exhaust fumes?