|Reviews for Milk Chocolate Bars|
| Lady Sakaki chapter 1 . 7/13/2010
The title caught my attention because I love chocolate! :3
I'm amazed at how well you captured and shaped the dad's character in such a short work! The tone of the piece has so many turns in it...humor, matter-of-fact-statements...I'm kinda jealous...
One thing..."Make a list, and estimate the for more productive shopping trips." Missing word/typo in the middle of the sentence...?
Thanks for the awesome read! -